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10-24-05, 03:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
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IP: 356E B92B
DIE DIE DIE DAMN SHITTY SONG!!!!!!1THIS WAS WHACK DONT LEAVE FEED CHECK
I Just Want Or Pray For Me Ft.Inter Instead
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10-24-05, 03:48 PM | #2 | ||||
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shits aiigh....like I said on msn.. qaulity..is a no no..presencre and delivery is dope...rest aiigh...keep up
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10-24-05, 03:48 PM | #3 | ||||
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beat starts off ugly...
gets annoyin the beat. voice kicks in, flows decent you sound a bit hight pitched / young, lyrics are good... hooks safe. not bad mate.
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10-24-05, 03:49 PM | #4 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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Not Bad, Not Bad...you had some nice vocabulary...and flow....hook was dope...put that ho to sleep
fuck that WHOOP THAT TRICK SON! good beat....dope beat..good flow.....i like the adlibs on the hoook....powerfull audio piece hear.......overall 8/10...keep at it....peace
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10-24-05, 03:57 PM | #5 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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I could hear when your MIC or whatever came on...the hiss was way too noticeable
ur vocals are too loud ur flow is good though ur delivery isn't bad...because ur emotion is there...but u need to learn how to use ur voice (tone/inflections)...ur young, so you'll have time to figure it out...Basically, try to make yoiur raps more melodic and not monotone ur flow is def. on in this...can't hate on that and I like the tone of the track...it's dark 7/10 good shit...work on those levels though P.S...Lyrics were decent at best...u can elevate that too RTF...if u haven't already http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211585
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10-24-05, 04:00 PM | #6 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 356E B92B
Thx A Lot Yo .........
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10-24-05, 05:47 PM | #7 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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i like the beat a LOT...u sound real young tho,and ur shit clips a lot on the chorus,flow is old school..aww man,the beat KEEPS GETTIN BETTER...chorus is ok,lyrics not real deep but point taken i guess..
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10-25-05, 05:45 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Thx For Feed^^^Upping...........
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10-25-05, 09:47 AM | #9 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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Upping................
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11-14-05, 12:51 PM | #10 | ||||
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Just saw this...may as well leave feed...
Can't comment on the beat...cause I made it haha.... But anyway...quality sucks...you can tell that this is old. Flow is really messed up I found...Like it wasnt structured very good. I dunno...its an old track so it doesnt matter. |
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11-14-05, 12:53 PM | #11 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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Lol@you Leaving Fed But Thx
Lol.....
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