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Old 10-26-05, 11:04 AM   #1
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Thumbs up Bangin new shyt from Q: Love for Hip hop....burn it baby!

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^^ Click on "Love for hip hop"


Beat: Dj Kquick
Hook: Tha Q, yea me attemptin to sing again..aaaaaarrrrrrg
Verses: both verses Tha Q


**The hook is obviously a play on the song "If loving you is wrong" because the beat mirrored it, IMO.

Concept: discovering myself after discovering rap (as a love)



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Old 10-26-05, 11:15 AM   #2
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ok...good beat choice...lool...wonder how u got that....singin is ok...lol...went off key a lil but ure not a singer...ok you come in...flow is good...lyrics seem personal rather than complex....second hook seems better...i like the singin actually...1st verse seemed a lil robotic in the middle...second seems much better...whats this bout ure dick throbbin lol.,....back to the song...i feelin this verse much more..presence more...likin the five source ent. line...u explained that to me last nite...right nice track...soryr forgot to mention multiss right here is the rest of what I was sayin:

Multis: were nice, liked the flow...good effect on the voices...it helped ure flow the multis

Delivery n Presence: This is always good..ure confident on the mic...

Emotion: A lil robotic first verse...but it picked up


Hook: 7/10
1st Verse: 7/10
2nd verse: 8.5/10

overall around 7.6789/10 lol

but nice track....
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Old 10-26-05, 11:27 AM   #3
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Old 10-26-05, 01:34 PM   #4
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Aight Yo Im Listening.........

Beat:I Like This Beat I Think I Used This On one Of My Tracks....
Like Ur SInging Lol Bit Off

Lyrics Of 1st Verse:Good Like Them Seem To Be Very Solid And Catchy
Emotion Is Good Keeps You Wanting To Listen The Way You Do This

Lol@Your Hook Again Your Singing

2nd Verse:
Good Lyrics,Like Your Precence Your Emtion Is Better In This Verse
Delivery Is Good!!!

Hook Again Lol

Dope Track
Like The Way Youre On This

Oh Lol At The Squeaky Voice At The Beggining Lol

Overall=9/10

Keep Up

Plz Rtf On My "True Story" Which Will Be Up SOon
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Old 10-26-05, 03:30 PM   #5
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Listening...

Damn...likin the beat..."My name is Tha Q" haha...we were just talkin bout that yesterday...Hook comes in...I like it...damn...first verse comes in...this is some emotional shit, and I am most definetly feelin this...I wanna do a track like this as well...Word...hook comes in again...nice...Second verse...emotional again, like the Biggie part...

Damn....good track man...emotional hard shit...Like the play with the hook...word. Keep droppin man, it's great shit.

Keep it up.
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Old 10-26-05, 04:31 PM   #6
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Old 11-06-05, 05:15 PM   #7
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beat i like it
flow good ive never really heard any flaws in ur flow to be honest
1st verse emotion pretty good lyrics are cool
loving the hook lol at you singing not that bad really i liek it something different
2nd verse you were better here emotion wise but i liked lyrics on the first verse better overall good track lol at me upping this
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