Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

or i'll kill you.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-27-05 at 03:44 PM

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Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 02:04 PM.

came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 02:35 PM.

‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell

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what ever happened to 10 lines? lmlo................word

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Voted For: Drakel

Premanition: First bar was pretty good, creative and I liked it, second bar was real weak, third bar was weak as well, wasn't feeling the closer either.

Drakel: First bar was weak, second bar had hella wordplay and that wordplay is quite played but this was aight, third bar was meh, more wordplay but I ain't seen this really ok bar, fourth bar was creative.

Drakel got this as he was basically more creative.

v/ Drakel

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Voted For: Drakel

Drakel

came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
^hehe nice opener, pretty funny stuff 7/10

you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
^cool bar, okay wordplay 6/10

check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
^funny shit, especially first line was good 7/10

so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
^good good, nothing special, just solid 6/10

no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
^haha, closer killed it...8/10

Total: 34/50 = 68%


Premanition

‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
^first line is good, using his sig and ish 7/10

Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
^decent decent, nothing wow though...6/10

Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
^hehe, liking this bar, good shit man, punches 8/10

Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell
^good closer, not as good as bar before this one tho 6/10

Total: 27/40 = 67,5%

Close battle right here, I feel both didn't try their best because I've seen far better.
I'ma give it to Drakel, I felt he edged it out by a very little bit...

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Voted For: Drakel

Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell

VS

you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book

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ha alrite gud battle drak

uppin

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Voted For: Drakel

Premanition

‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
Didn't connect..
Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
Decent..
Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
Not a punch..
Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell
Didn't connect..

Drakel

came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
No..
you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
Butter and better sound nothing alike, therefore ruining this wordplay and punch attempt..
check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
Didn't connect..
so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
Not a punch..
no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
Decent..

Overall, this battle was decent. Premanition's verse was very inconsistent. There was a decent punch in there, and one other one that had potential, but was worded wrong. The rest didn't connect at all. Drakel also had one decent punch, and the rest were either forced or just didn't connect. To me, it came down to which verse I liked better.. and I have to go with Premanition. Even though the opener was completely played, his overall verse just seemed better to me. Drakel's wordplay seemed forced some of the time, and another time it just didn't make sense trying to pass of butter with better. I've seen some instance of all of the lines Drakel used before, and it just wasn't that entertaining to me. So, Premanition gets my vote.

Vote - Premanition

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