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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit in general.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-05 at 08:27 PM

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JRoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-05 07:58 PM.

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-05 07:59 PM.

Ok i'mma get this done real....real quick.......

Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//

My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//

I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//

With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//

U Droppin Is Pointless, 'Lose The Weight' And 'Run'//
Freeze Ya Gums- Cuz Yo Chances Of Spittin Is 'Slim 2 NumB'//

Testin Your Faith Since U Commencin In 'Deranged-Hate'//
Gats 2 Ya Face, Place 'Viral Knives Thru This 'Ill' Character' And Literally 'Maim-Phate'//

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^^Kids Are Stupid On The Internet Like This...lol

My Music HOE

I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
Se me real, I mean focused...something that's unheard of
I never did kid's homework, but I'll complete Project Murda
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle
I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench

All up in yo grill.

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Voted For: JRoy


Firetruck-
Good structure i enjoyed reading it. But very very basic like "you suck at rap, " you rap like crap" you know like that kinda stuff.... Ya it was good flow but not feelin it, Personals were ok though if you would have stretched it out a little more i think you would have got it


JRoy-
Terrible Terrible terrible terrible structure #1..... Ok wordplay and punches though both of you did pretty decent on it and good flow, you made sense in all your lines , you did alot of """"" ehh not feelin it. You did good overall though.

v/JROy

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RTF Honestly

Thank You.

Voted For: MC Firetruck

JRoy..
Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//
Whack as fuck..
My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//
Played concept..
I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//
Meh...not that good..
With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//
That is weak wordplay..
U Droppin Is Pointless, 'Lose The Weight' And 'Run'//
Freeze Ya Gums- Cuz Yo Chances Of Spittin Is 'Slim 2 NumB'//
Another easy wordplay..
Testin Your Faith Since U Commencin In 'Deranged-Hate'//
Gats 2 Ya Face, Place 'Viral Knives Thru This 'Ill' Character' And Literally 'Maim-Phate'//
Not streched at all..[/sarcasim]

MC Firetruck
I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
Haha original..
Se me real, I mean focused...something that's unheard of
I never did kid's homework, but I'll complete Project Murda
Not bad...good wordplay..
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
Word, nice punch..
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
Hahaha, bit played wordplay..but good..
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle
Wicked wordplay..dope flow..
I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench
Word, another nice wordplay line..

Vote: MC Firetruck

Seriously I thought JRoy dropped really whack. Props to MC Firetruck, good verse.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: JRoy

MC Firetruck-structure was pretty good through the whole thing, punches were okay, nothing special...personal was kinda weak...your rhyme scheme kinda fell of at the end...but the first 6 lines were good

JRoy-First off...same thing I tell everyone that does it...dont use the //'s....your best line "The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'" that one made me laugh....stayed consistent with your rhyme scheme

V-JRoy

Reason:Both drops were good, but im givin it to JRoy cuz i liked his punches better

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Voted For: MC Firetruck

I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
4..meh...ok
Se me real, I mean focused...something that's unheard of
I never did kid's homework, but I'll complete Project Murda
3..weak
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
6...good
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
3..didn't rhyme and cents/sense relation is pretty much played out
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle
5.....ite
I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench
3...blah

DECENT VERSE.HAD SOME PLAYED SHIT LIKE THE CENTS/SENSE ONE.BEST LINE WAS PROBABLY THE OUTSHINE ONE.

Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//
4....ok...2nd line was good..1st suked
My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//
5...decent
I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//
5...decent..nutin spectacular tho
With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//
3....no...weak/week relation is damn played
U Droppin Is Pointless, 'Lose The Weight' And 'Run'//
Freeze Ya Gums- Cuz Yo Chances Of Spittin Is 'Slim 2 NumB'//
3...forced rhyming
Testin Your Faith Since U Commencin In 'Deranged-Hate'//
Gats 2 Ya Face, Place 'Viral Knives Thru This 'Ill' Character' And Literally 'Maim-Phate'//
3..weak shit and forced rhyme again

WELL.YOUR STRUCTURE WAS FUCKED.FIX IT UP.AND YOU STARTED OFF WITH SOME OK PUNCHES.BUT YOU JUST FADED OUT.I THINK WITH ABOUT 2 MORE DECENT PUNCHES..YOU WOULD HAVE WON THIS.

vote-MC firetruck

RTF in sig.

Lol @ unexplained votes. I thought the rules said No Bullshit.

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Voted For: JRoy

My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//

With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//

J, them two punches were dope but your structures fuckin ugly.

MC takes this for wittier punches and better personals and overall had the better verse.

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I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle

VS

My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//

With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//

J, them two punches were dope but your structures fuckin ugly.

MC takes this for wittier punches and better personals and overall had the better verse.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck

I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill
3.. Pretty played shit..
Se me real, I mean focused...something that's unheard of
I never did kid's homework, but I'll complete Project Murda
3.. I guess..
I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!
2.. This was weak..
Try who? Me in a showdown? Elevate to your best
'Cuz change is good for some, but none of your shit makes cents
4.. Whatever..
You from Washington and I know you'll be the g to fall
I'ma black your eye so damn much you wont Seatalle
2.. Wack..
I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench
6.. This was pretty good..

Overall - 20

JRoy

Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//
1.. Played to shit..
My 'Split Personality' Must Yo Reason For Your 'Strange Behavior'//
mc firetrucks 'Resistance' Is 'Pointless' Like 'Kemo-Patients' Usin 'Electric Shavers'//
2.. Retarded..
I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//
1.. Quit with the fucking gay wordplay..
With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//
4.. Decent enough..
U Droppin Is Pointless, 'Lose The Weight' And 'Run'//
Freeze Ya Gums- Cuz Yo Chances Of Spittin Is 'Slim 2 NumB'//
1.. Fucking garbage..
Testin Your Faith Since U Commencin In 'Deranged-Hate'//
Gats 2 Ya Face, Place 'Viral Knives Thru This 'Ill' Character' And Literally 'Maim-Phate'//
0.. Stretched, no punch.. just retarded..

Overall - 9

Vote - MC Firetruck