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1 | 16.67% |
Illist |
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5 | 83.33% |
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Guilty Of Chryme
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Illist vs Black Arts
IP: 28AD 5545
Battle Rules:
6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting House Rules. No Bullshit. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-18-05 at 12:49 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
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IP: A181 D033
Black Arts has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 06:57 PM.
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This is my first post!
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IP: A181 D033
Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz.............. ...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,* It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo, You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,** Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave, Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave, ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet? Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...*** __________________________________________________ __ Explanations: *Nelson Muntz is the bully in the Simpsons **Kid from Kid N' Play had the highest fade back in the day ***his name is spelt incorrectly; it should be spelt "illest" |
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IP: 3240 794D
Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 07:42 PM.
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black! This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! |
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin......
Can someone vote? Drop links n I'll return the favor. |
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: A41A 6CAC
Voted For: Illist
Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches, You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz............... ...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,* 4...weak punch,didn't like how you had to explain it. It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,** 3...again,didn't like how you had to explain.And the 1st line sounded forced wit the multis. Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave, Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave, 5....decent. ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet? Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...*** 5...didn't like the intial usage in 1st line,as it didn't diss.But punch was decent...but..you shoulda worded it in a way in which u didn't have to explain it tho. kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts & It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black! 6...nice.....wordin coulda been a tad better...but it wuz ite still. This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten 5....decent,nothing spectcular,but decent. I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" 4...ehh...not really feelin it,honestly.Becuz it didn't seem to diss him much. This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! 6...good punch. Black Arts... Don't explain ya punches.I just hate that now.Cuz think about it..in real life..if ya spittin..would you stop 'n explain ya shit?No..so....try and make ya verses in a way you could spit in real life as well.The 2nd bar...where you rhymes fuckin homo with luck 'n no show...it sounded forced.Try to avoid that.And in the last bar...the way u tried to rip his name..it doesn't diss.Just cuz the 1st couple of letter in 2 words spill his name..it doesn't diss. Illist... Liked ya spit more.Still..you had a few flaws.The rained ya parade line didn't seem to diss much.And the popt art one wuz worded a lil bland in my opinion. But Illist gets my vote for coming harder wit punches and having cleaner,unforced multis than Black. Vote-Illist But this was a good battle.I liked how you both use multis and shit...keep at it the 2 of you. ~1~ |
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Moderator
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Voted For: Illist
Illist kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts & It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black! Lmao. This was cool.. This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten Didn't connect.. I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" Nah.. This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! Pretty decent.. Black Arts Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches, You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz.............. ...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches Not a punch.. It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo, You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show, Played out.. Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave, Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave, Forced.. flawed and floored sound nothing alike.. ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet? Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check I know this is a personal.. but these type of punches are played.. Overall, Illist had one good line, one decent line, and the rest were sub part. Black Arts didn't have any good lines or any decent lines. His verse was full with forced wordplay and played punches. Illist had two pretty original punches, along with some decent wordplay. So, in conclusion, Illist just came with the better overall verse. He had more quotables, better punches, and better wordplay. Vote - Illist |
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thx for voting people....
...uppin' werd |
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Light Weight
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IP: B57D 51F8
Voted For: Black Arts
you did aight ...could of done bettr wit yo punches/wordplay .................................................. ........u did have sum ill rhymes and an ok vocab......but if u work on yo punches thatlll improve yo skilll v/black arts |
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
who's verse are you even talking about? ^
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New to RV
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IP: EE64 A262
Voted For: Illist
v:Illist Black Arts Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches, You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz.............. ...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,* booooooooooo 0-10 It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo, You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,** this one was nice 5-10 Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave, Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave, tight second lines 6-10 ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet? Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...*** werd his name is spelled wrong lol 7-10 overall i think u had nice concepts but some were played (that first line), u started off soft but ended hard like tha after-effects of sex Illist kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts & It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black! lmaooooooooooo tight 8-10 This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten this was a nice concept 6-10 I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" wording? not good in second line 5-10 This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! serious close 8-10 overall ya verse had most categories, nice flow, good punches, nameplay a few times, okay wordplay, wording coulda been a lil better though...good shit altogether VOTE: Illist
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 075B 8AA7
werd.... thanks for returning the favor.. I'll hit up one of your battles in a bit.
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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This was feedback posted for Illist
IP: 9457 B83E
ok i think u got thsi both need to work on that strucutre in places jsut showing love props
bumpppppp.
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 71DB 93E1
Voted For: Illist
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave, Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave, ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet? Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...*** VS This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! Both came weak here... but illest just came harder. RTF IN SIG ASAP PLEASE
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