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11-20-05, 11:19 AM
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Do Re Mi
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Final Kiss
IP: F008 DBF6
quick little poem i wrote a minute ago... lemme know what ya think
Final Kiss . . . we sit upon a hill, on a night like this a warm breeze softens the crisp air the moon in all its glory shines for us to brighten the love that you and I share . you stare into the horizon, eyes in a glaze the most beautiful site ive ever seen a godess so lovely as you, i do not deserve a pinch on my skin, to assure this is not a dream . slowly i move toward you, time is in no rush our eyes meet, my heart sinks to the abyss and then my heart soars, lifted from the dark our love, our passion, represented by one last kiss . . .
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11-30-05, 02:42 PM
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New to RV
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IP: D4FA A3B8
a godess so lovely as you, i do not deserve
a pinch on my skin, to assure this is not a dream good....... slowly i move toward you, time is in no rush our eyes meet, my heart sinks to the abyss and then my heart soars, lifted from the dark our love, our passion, represented by one last kiss nicce line.. great job on the poem ................. gk |
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