I'm going a little different from what I usually do....I wrote this as in my bf's eyes, on how i think that he sees me! And how he sees the things that I do. Tell me what ya'l think!

-hook-
What goes on between me and you/
Is what will stay between me and you/
There's nothing they can say or do/
That would make them put their hands on you/
You know I'd never do you wrong/
I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
And... Baby you are the one/
And that's why I'm making this love song/
-verse-1-
Kiss me baby. Touch me affectionatly/1
Next to me directing me to infinite ectasy/2
The stimulater the simulator of your freaky behavior/3
THere's no one greater so lay back let me do you a favor/4
Being your man is an honor I'm happy to have/5
Never had an argument. we just chill be happy and laugh/6
Unofficially married and you're my baby lady/7
Beautifully spoken words of poetry and yet it only covers the basis/8
Of my feelings. Saying I love you girl barely even scratched the surface/9
Of what I feel about you baby. You're my soul mate for certain/10
And i wanna kiss you in all the places that's soothing/11
And maybe emulate some of the moves I've learned in porno movies/12
Heh.. I'm just playin baby I admire yo sense of humor/13
And with your personality. This prophet foresees a bright future/14
With me and you doin what we both do best/15
Just chill with each other and give the world a rest/16
you know?
-hook-
What goes on between me and you/
Is what will stay between me and you/
There's nothing they can say or do/
That would make them put their hands on you/
You know I'd never do you wrong/
I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
And... Baby you are the one/
And that's why I'm making this love song/
-verse-2-
I've been patiently waiting for the day my baby came to me/1
And told me everything would be alright and that she loved me/2
And hugged me as I hugged her and told her how much I loved her/3
Aside from the family and God and Jesus there's no one I treasure above her/4
I trust her with my heart. I'll take bats to peoples backs if I have to/5
Beat the crap out any faggot whoever wrongly approach you/6
I love you baby/ You make me feel like a complete soldier/7
You help me to lift this boulder set up on my shoulder/8
You see..
[sung]
Sometimes I feel like I'm alone in this world/9
But then I realize that I got me a wonderful girl/10
Sometimes I think I'm crazy and I almost break down and cry/11
But then you come and i feel at peace when I look into your eyes/12
-hook-[sung by B. Irv]
What goes on between me and you/
Is what will stay between me and you/
There's nothing they can say or do/
That would make them put their hands on you/
You know I'd never do you wrong/
I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
And... Baby you are the one/
And that's why I'm making this love song/
-verse-3-
Baby I need you. come let me hug you/1
Come let me touch you and kiss you and love you/2
And show you love that you have never ever witnessed/3
And prove that I only need you I don't care for these other bitches/4
Now look. I old you I loved you more than life in itself/5
And I'm gonna say what I want I don't care if its corny as hell/6
Do you know how I feel? Do you know the sacrifices I'll give/7
I'll give it all just to kiss you one more time on yo lips/8
From yo beautiful features to that sexy personality that you have/9
You're more than I deserve but you're still with me baby and I'm glad/10
Cuz I'm stuck with you just as tightly as you're stuck with me/11
Infatuation my ass. People don't realize this is the real thing/12
You're the realest thing ever to make an impact in my life/13
The inner beast has been calmed. I no longer put up the fight/14
Of trying hide behind the persona hating everything in my sight/15
Now I'm real openminded and cool collected and the likes/16
I no longer feel as though I'm walking alone in a world I don't belong/17
I'm in familar territory with the one I most adore. My one and only love/18
-hook-
What goes on between me and you/
Is what will stay between me and you/
There's nothing they can say or do/
That would make them put their hands on you/
You know I'd never do you wrong/
I've been waiting for that right woman for so long/
And... Baby you are the one/
And that's why I'm making this love song/

Here are my links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2554062
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2554067

that was decent, it flowed well..but if thats from your b/f's eyes thens hes a lil fruity.
6/10

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