dark matters... ill concept, but i have no idea how i'd spit over this... sounds like some kinda of crazy mf doom styles. Needs a few more changes, but the snare/clap thing is nice. One more thing - it needs to be mixed hella better... the whole thing sounds kinda cheap to me. The hook is scary as hell, lol... word.

beat of life... ima jack it. LOL j/k. peepin... I like the bassline or kicks or whatever that is. the melody is a nice sound, but i'd clean it a bit. same snare or clap thing as in the last. I like the steel drums droppin in and out - they offer a nice mixup. word - this ones good, but again, I couldn't use it, jus cause ain't really feelin it. Oh yea - hook is pretty good too. I'd try using a few more chord switch-ups tho, instead of only goin up or down 1 or 2 chords. Sometimes simpler is better, but sometimes not

louis... (peepin track as well) lol @ crazy hades writing this. wack @ straight biting stan. Your flow isn't that bad, but i can't let someone ghost for me... I just find i end up re-writing the whole thing anyways. I can't even bite cause I usually hate everyone elses flow but my own. haha. Beat goes pretty good, i like the way you didn't try a hook on this and tried somethin diff. Too bad it was used. I dunno - I'd drop that main melody a few times, cause it gets repetative. Decent beat.

word.

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