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Old 12-22-05, 02:07 AM   #1
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Gamble vs Poetic Artist

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Topic - Eternal damnation


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Old 12-22-05, 02:58 AM   #2
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Poetic Artist has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-05 02:58 AM.
 
Old 12-22-05, 03:01 AM   #3
Ysdat
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*A young man in the mix of terror and war,searches for answers in life and to find why are these current actions of the world happening. Stumbling across a scroll, he sits down on the curbside and is absorbed by what he reads.

12BC
peace was tranquial a beast would thank you for lending a hand
money wasnt an issue contemplated,your not spending a grand
life taking and duplicated man made machine's are yet to be created
simplicity is the norm,physical health never castraited
position of well being is simple,respect is mutual, no human does battle
picture perfect green landscapes,witness distant farmer grazing the cattle
self disipline is taught, love is conquered, not labeled a thug but a bloke
happily daily good old home brew is the only thing making us choke
murderous drug's were not an issue,no such thing's as prescription's
no police brutality,were normal citizen's no such thing as conviction's
eyes open and bright daily, looking forward to what life has to bring




2000
ravishing war is at its peak, the beast is in vital command
terriost label the helpless as killers, murder rates rise as we stand
man made machines duplicate lifes, they found the blood on the cross
tryna clone jesus the throne needs us,but they love to show whos boss
majority of money equals respect,gods been replaced my doller signs
youth running rampant, wisdom remains concealed in the older minds
truth is simply hidden gods love has been slipping daily for years
his heart went frozen, no reason to help those who kill and dont shed tears
he used jesus as a subliminal message, but infinite people turned there veiw
watching people abuse each other daily, bruise another baby what else could he do
releasing all pressure from his shoulders, he throws the crown deep underground
instantly the heavens erupt into gulf of flames, world goes deaf by the thundering sound
lifes instantly taken,like bush has been given twice as much power
so ask yourself, are you willing to burn on earth and have the flames of hell rise?
cause each day of suffering is payment,for each day we tell lies
 
 


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