-chorus-(veronica)-homegurl

someday(3x) u'll be wishin i still felt the same but it'll be to late

-verse1-(alliik war a.k.a. raw killa)

yo when i metchu bitch u was a pidgeon down at da bottom,
fuckin wit me i made u dat apple bottom booty,sportin ralph lauren n gucci,
now u startin 2 sound like dat bitch from i love lucy,u lucky u even fucked wit a g//
i showed u da good life,but still lived da hood life,
now i told u from da begginin my way of livin was trife,
jus lookin 4 a fuck not a bitch 2 call my wife//
"someday u'll b wishin i still felt the same but it'll b 2 late",
someday u'll b givin me brain hollarin pump ya breaks,
did i mention when u gone i b fuckin ya sista while u outta state?//
all i wanted was sum head n pussy,but u pushin a nigga 4 marriage,
big house 2 kids in a babies carrage wait stop dont push me//
i made u bitch,dont make me break u bitch,jus respect a pimp n work ya trick,
girl u got it twisted u think ima stop my pimpin n put away my jersey,
nigga str8 from jersey,pimpin a baby blue sean john jump suit wit a red throwback jersey,str8 fuckin da game n givin these hoes no mercy//
bottom line bitch "someday u'll b wishin i still felt da same but it'll b 2 late",
yea w/e gurl shut up i'll b ova at 8

-chorus-

-verse2-(me n veronica cypher)

I fell in love unexpectedly n I gave u everything,(veronica)
im bout stackin dollaz ma not ur wedding ring//(allik war)
I should’ve known that when u fall in love..aint nuttin good bout it,(veronica)
i told u i was a thug baby girl i thought u said u bout it?//(allik war)
You kept on playin ya childish games,stuntin around wit otha dames,(veronica)
i thought u was monica,wut veronica hell da pussy all da same//(allik war)
Till’ I jus picked up n left u all alone in the cold,(veronica)
u got me twisted who had u fixed up in a centerfold?//(allik war)
all I needed was somebody who’d be down 4 me,(veronica)
who put u down wit my team,surrounded in fame n creame?//(allik war)
Now u callin me,beggin me to come back home to you,(veronica)
i got no time 4 love girl i got packs 2 move u kno how i do//(allik war)
But I gotta move around clown,aint no playa holdin me down,(veronica)
but i bet when i come 2 yo town again u'll call me 2 go down//(allik war)

-chorus-

-verse3-allik war

love aint a thing 2 me,cuz da shit could kill a g,
gotta stay focused on money,hoes,n trees//
keepin it pimpin day afta day,
these hoes b twirkin for dat pay,
best believe she suckin for purple haze,
if it aint bout money or sex the tek gettin spray-ed,
get in my way of stackin these chips u gettin lay-ed//
but back 2 da topic at hand,i was born 2 b a pimp not ya man,
u see it in my clothes n the way i stand,u jus part of a bigga plan//
love n pain,pain n love,thought u knew u wasnt fuckin wit a scrub,
im into menage a trois n 1 nite stands not fallin in love//
"someday u'll be wishin i still felt the same but it'll be to late,"
i aint yo lover girl i was jus lookin 4 a fuck so get yo shit str8//

-chorus-(til the end)

ayt shit finally complete ya'll tell me wut u think uppin 4 feedback!!!!!

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my new shit peep

decent drop man couldve been better up on your flow and structure thats your down fall

other than that man pretty good rhyming scheme was on point just ne ed alil elevation
~1~
just up on that shit it old you famz

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thanks 4 da feedback homie...i didnt really sit here n try 2 perfect this 1 cuz dis home gurl of mine jus sent me da chorus yesterday n was like write a verse 2 it so i did im waitin 4 her verse 2 finish this shit up wit but stay my nigga holla back uppin 4 more votes

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my new shit peep

yea it was pretty decent.....i do admit i've seen betta.....def. need to up ur shit on da flow...cause i was threw off in some places....but otha than dat erything else seemed on point.....7/10....good drop