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12-30-05, 07:16 PM
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Intermental feat. CarteLL and Symmitry - Move
IP: 63AC 52A2
www.soundclick.com/intermental
"Move" dope ass track Verse 1- Intermental Verse 2 - Symmitry Verse 3 - CarteLL/Symmitry/Intermental Hooks - CarteLL will edit with links
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12-30-05, 07:18 PM
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IP: 63AC 52A2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218422
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217370
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12-30-05, 09:58 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
lol@ you using this OLDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS....shadowville beat....wtf?..why is dude opening wit a hook....it opens wit a verse...the chorus break comes at like 50 secs....inter YOU ARE SPITTING OVER THE CHORUS BREAK....yall jus killed the song by spitting to the beat wrong....yall gotta learn how to identify musical structure...this is ridiculous......inter ya verse was koo..flow was kinda choppy..sounds like u still havign breathe control probs.....second dude was jus wack I'm sorry....third dude was pretty good had strongest delivery...inter ya 2nd lil verse was on beat proper an flow was a tad better....this hook is mixed bad too..the dubs is a tad off hurts it sonically.....yall messed up on this one big time...no hate at all..I am jus being really real wit yall....if yall had strutured song properly it woulda been a much tighter track........1
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12-30-05, 10:28 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I rapped on this beat
but I never posted the track it was my Ike diss Umm...as for what Trip is talkin about, sometimes opening a Beat in Cool Edit and Looking at the structures helps with identifying when the breaks are... Honestly, sometimes I don't give a shit and will flow over the so-called break because the producer will screw it up BIG TIME...like, there's no identifiable end to the verse and start to the "break"... Most beats start off either with 8 bars for the hook and then 16 verse Some, however, start off 16 for a verse, then 8, then another 16 On the other hand, some beats have a few seconds for an intro, and then one of the aforementioned structures...U gotta use ur EAR and count the bars man umm...as for this track...I liked the hook... inter...u were cool...nothing major one way or the other 2nd cat sounded like a beginner third cat was good not a bad track...I wasn't so bothered by the violation of the beat's structure stay up 1 |
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12-31-05, 09:23 AM
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IP: 2005 1F39
word thanks fo the feed ayo trip..i see what u sayin...i jus listenin again to it...i need to clead dat up thanks q
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12-31-05, 09:32 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FC40 19F6
Aight
Hooks Koo Inter: Like Ya Dleivery Flows Nice Emotions Koo Libs Sound A Lil Muffled Lyrics Are Koo Lol@Bang More Pussy Than A Hooker Boi Hook Again 2nd Cat Flows Aight,Different Dleivery Not That Good Emotions Aight Hook Again Agiht Like How YOu Switch Around On The 3rd Bit Lol@2nd Cat Again,His Flows Weird Got A Weird Style Lol Hook Againn Overall: Koo Track,2nd Cat Was A Bit Of A Letdown 7/10 Keep Up!
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12-31-05, 09:37 AM
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IP: 2005 1F39
thank ya........
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