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12-14-05, 12:37 PM
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Joey Carolina - Too Easy (First Single!!)
IP: 5467 E2B2
yeahhh, all in about 15 minutes of work....
www.soundclick.com/joeycarolina http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216759 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216865
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12-14-05, 02:26 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
beat is familiar
ur vocals come in too loud...lower them pls...lol and the way u have ur verse dubbed sounds like your buddy is in the background trying to rap with you = out of sync = not good ur flow is really lazy...which isn't bad...but ur delivery isn't tight enough to pull that off in this song ur rhyming is pretty decent sounds like you were BSin though... decent for what it was...However, I'd like to see a full song. holla 1 |
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12-14-05, 02:46 PM
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IP: 5467 E2B2
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word, i mean its 2 verses and a chorus.... which is what most people would do on a song if they have somebody featured but yeah, thnx for the feed, and i AM still just gettin started on audio, only like my 3rd recorded track....... uppin
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12-15-05, 12:28 AM
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IP: 5467 E2B2
uppppppp ......
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12-15-05, 02:29 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
aight peepin now...
Production:hmm the beat is aight.....commercial right??? :7.5/10 Flow:ya flow was good you rode the beat decent.....aint too bad:7/10 Emotion:Man ya emotion was a lil down if u upped that it'd be better:6.5/10 Pressense:You got a good pressense on the mic no doubt about that....:7/10 Overall:This was overall alright..if you had better quality it would be a lot better and if u upped ur emotion u could be one of the elite heads on rv |
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12-15-05, 02:34 AM
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IP: 5467 E2B2
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no doubt, and that was only like my third audio ever recoreded and i realize emotion n expression is the thing that i really need to work on, im just really not sure how... 
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12-15-05, 02:35 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
just keep practicing man when i first started i wasn't too hot with emotion but now look at me....just keep spittin and writing and getta better mic...and if your in Lady Fiya's tourney then thats good....cuz that'll help u a lot
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12-15-05, 02:42 AM
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IP: 5467 E2B2
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worrd, i was but i couldnt record before the first date i had the verses all written and everything
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12-15-05, 02:44 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
ahh that sucks... mehh i'll help ya if u need some help not much i can really tell u tho sept keep flowing and i'll give u links too get better quality
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12-15-05, 02:46 AM
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IP: 5467 E2B2
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worrd, lemme check those out
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12-15-05, 04:31 AM
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IP: 079C 0756
not really feeling the beat...your flow and delivery sounds to rushed...vocals need to be EQ'd better...lyrics are aight...quality needs work...keep elevating man peace.
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