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Old 12-15-05, 11:41 PM   #1
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yeah man dopest song i've ever done imo

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3218871

listen too it and leave feed and i'll rtf on wat ever track but DROP A LINK


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Old 12-16-05, 12:23 AM   #2
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upppin in this bitchhh
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Old 12-16-05, 12:36 AM   #3
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liked the theme


voice/quality are good


flow is good most of the way through


Ur DUBs are panned far left and right...lemme suggest that u pan them only 25 left and right...see how that sounds...


ur hook fits the theme of the track, but could be more catchy




not a bad track homie


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Old 12-16-05, 12:44 AM   #4
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thanks for the feed fam

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Old 12-16-05, 02:25 PM   #6
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alright good looks uppin this biotch
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Old 12-16-05, 02:31 PM   #7
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Aight

Beats Dope.....

Hooks Nice
Deliverys Dope
FLows Different But I Like It,On Point
Emtions Koo
I Like Your Voice
Lyircs Are Nice
Presence Is Koo


Hook Again Lol

2nd verse Same As Above Really

LIke THe Outro Panning Fade Out Its Koo


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Old 12-16-05, 02:37 PM   #8
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aight i'll do it all when i get home tonight i'm at school
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Old 12-16-05, 03:29 PM   #9
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always loved this beat nice underground ish...flow and delivery are nice...lyrics are coo...the hook fits the beat pretty good...quality is decent...second verse is coo...over-all hot shit man keep it up.
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Old 12-16-05, 04:00 PM   #10
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Concept isn't that original, but your flow is nice. 1st lyrics are pretty good. I don't think the beat was the right choice, however. Hook isn't that catchy, but it's ok. Ended too soon in my opinion, but overall I liked it. If you voice was a little louder over the beat I would probably bump this in my car.
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