Try again.

you got to remember when you post new songs youn have to leave feedback to atleast 2 other songs and post the link


what up what up my nigree - wtf?

lol @ you usin the beat we was just talkin about on aim.

Werdz
lol, I did not like his verse
just the way his voice sounded and the way he delivered his verse
no lines that really stood out

Phase.One
the rhyme scheme at the beginnin was dope
I wasnt feelin ya delivery in this, its like you both tryin to sound laid back. and it seems like yall tryin to make ya'lls voice sound like 50 cent

3rd verse
word @ this beginnin, mos def better
the philip banks line was dope
I liked Charlie's verse here much better than his 1 st verse

lol, damn @ the money is ya world line
hmmm
yeah

yall came the best together in the 3rd verse, cos it was the only verse I was feelin
it wasnt wack though, its just like one of them "lesser" songs that be on a cd that you might skip over on a bad day
lol

yo, RTF on this shit
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217392

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