http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3228812

yup yup.

beat= i made it
1st=me
2nd=Inter
3rd=Me & Inter

a song from my demo

left feed on
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2580939
and thatf uck christnas song by UNF

WOW...THAT BEAT IS TRASH!!
Wtf is that shit.Sounds like some shit you'll hear at a circus.Ya'll prolly a bunch of clowns anyways.ANd wtf @ that hook.Shit is gay.Sounds like a baby or something.
The 1st verse,dude's delivery sucks and flow sounds forced..it picked up a little at the end,but for the most part..it sucked.Lyrics were meh.
2nd verse..delivery was good.Flow is bassically the same as the faggot in the 1st verse..Lyrics were better here
3rd-Bah,I stopped the track right here..

That circus type beat is fucking annoying.

thanks fucking much, really appreciate it

yo what the fuck thats some wild shitt, but Its catchy , but first dude delivery is not that good, he needs to flow on the beat a little more catchy a calmly he seemed like he kept on forgettin to spit, second dude was a little bit more calm but seemed to stumble on his words in a few places, 3rd dude and the one after that were the best on the beat they seemed to flow the best

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thanks for the honest feed

I actually like the beat...even if it is a tad loopish and repetitive

and the hook is catchy, whatever it is

I still say hooks should be simple and almost chant-like to be catchy


Inter rode the "down"beat...which makes it sound weird to me

though the flow is decent...


this track is disjointed though...I'm not understanding the concept


sounds unique though


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what about my verse stupid

I don't know who you are calling stupid, but you can can that shit dawg. I'm not ya father. So, all that "teenage angst" can chill da fuck out. Anyway, ya shit was decent at best, pointless at worst.

Good enough?



*dumb ass kid*

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haha
*gets mad cuz hes been called stupid*

ur a clown son



don't get mad at me cuz u dropped a wack fuckin track and no one is feelin it



go fuck yaself

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