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what suicide gets ya
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have your ever seen some one sever there head
20 minutes latter and still they an't dead squirming in a blood puddle in which they have bled looking for a gun to let go of some lead but of course you just couldn't see don't you wish you can be a corpse just like me soon you will see it ain't easy to see sence youve been blind from the age of just three seriously but it dont ever matter falling in pieces as my relationship shatter's tattered by flawles dreams regardless it' seems spreading open the legs to ingarden my seeds sending out juices and harden white streams startin the steam off in the mist dead people i seen ass i relized im in hell draggin my head eyes clickin like bells what is that smell it's burning flesh everyone naked or sitting in mesh i guess god never liked me lightly stab my heart most likely mightbe the next one thrown in the pit close enough for the red demon to girp rip of both of my limbs hell is internally eternally life suffering Last edited by lil S : 12-30-05 at 11:17 PM. |
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uppin.................................uppin....... ..................uppin........................... .uppin
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leave you rest'n pz's
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you lost me in your content...what suicide gets you"..?
this verse lacked justifications towards your title didnt seem like you put alot of effort into it.. vocab was average...just try n hold a direction n keep the readers interested ...try puns/wordplay/meta's dont just write...THINK... no hate man
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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