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12-24-05, 12:32 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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"Feedback"..for YOU !!! Ft Biggi
IP: A6CC 8109
wow...ur shit is so trash..i HAD to hook this up quick..if u think im talkin to YOU !!!
I PROLY AM !! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3255153 links------------------ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2589071 ecko http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2589076 past tense
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12-24-05, 09:25 PM | #2 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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aww nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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12-25-05, 11:02 AM | #3 | |||
OYD
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beat cud be louder...or lower ur vocals just a tad...maybe 1.5-2 decibels
the Biggie add-on was off beat, so it took away from it. But, as always, his lyrics are dope. I liked your rhyming here and there. Your flow was good, but your delivery of them was monotone throughout. This wasn't a good "song". But, if you were messing around, it was decent for what it was. Your verse as a whole was pretty decent. 1 |
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12-25-05, 03:22 PM | #4 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 52DC C92F
beat a lil low....
wtf @ your lyrics lol.....crazy ass bastard...your pronunciation was a lot better on this track...good job on that... pretty good track...lyrics are what stands out...good stuff...crazy dunno what else to say
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12-25-05, 03:31 PM | #5 | ||||
Middle Weight
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the sample is kinda weird
good, you slowed down roflmao @ the chester like cheetos line the beat is kind of low the 2nd biggie sample is dope as hell I cant remember what song its from damn the beat make biggie's flow sound choppy it almost seems like you got 2 beats playin at the same time at biggie's samples man wtf up's with that? this is a "ok" track, the production made it bad. and its good you're startin to slow down your words pZ |
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12-25-05, 04:02 PM | #6 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: A6CC 8109
man...mah balls SKANK...ima go wash up..fucked some dirty pussyy...........but yea..thx bro !! /\'n
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