Battle Rules:

1:00-5:00 min max
You "Can" do hooks and everything, you can not ask for anyone else to be in the song. it's just like a normal song. get your own beats.
Topic: Reminiscing without hope
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Goodluck Rev

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 12-18-05 at 04:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-05 04:04 PM.

The song is like 15 seconds too long. Is that ok with you?

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www.soundclick.com/therevelation

Reminiscing Without Hope

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yea thats cool man, dont worry.

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Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-05 02:05 PM.

www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05

Song will be up shortly....soundclick is doin somin so i can't upload yet.

"Reminiscin"

LYRICS:
"Reminiscing Without Hope"

Hook:
Takin minimal times, I chance my fate
Maybe if I'd relax, I'd advance with hate
No my vision will soon decide to cope
So forever I'll reminsce without the hope

Verse1:
Yea, yea...reminisce with me..Yea
Ima find whats wrong as my journey out rolls
So I shared the light, I couldn't out glow
But without hope, I'm visible beyond my see
So intelligent, yes that was me
Looked among the brightest of all disguises
And I was the slightest of all surprises
So messed up, I waved both my hands
Saying hi to god was my dream to man
Then people would know Christ exists
So pain would heal and show life a twist
Givin up aint the expressions shown
It's the heart, no confessions known
I'll help myself help yall find the glow
So yall would reminisce with the flow
yea reminisce with me yo...yea reminisce.

Verse2
Me driftin off connection is really weird
But me I fear havin to share my ear
Impossible aint nothin in this generation
Pass it on, use ya skill and penetration
Just to live on strong you'd sing a song?
Ok then wheres the wrong in that
Kids runnin hard, drummin on a cat
Stunnin the apposed, so dark it's all black
Comin in rough, enough came first
I'ma burst through the core with my verse
Annonoumusly my wish came true
So me reignin fame is my main too!
And anything different I change my opitician
I'd fate to survive in this situation
Considerin hope was gone and missin
Ima carry on, picture me reminiscin

Verse3
Lost with a decision too...
Sake the forgivin, and still I’m alive, born to fate livin
Positive suggestions stutter along
Only to come across a lover in wrong
Trying to get a grip on what I grab
I seem so infected, I’d scream I’m neglected
Like a assassin my strengths show imagination
But it’s hard, so I’d glow a sensation
Impossible you say its negative and not true?
Furious kids walkin the streets…
with who?, with you
So you’d complicate the struggles that I partake
Just to perfect the skills you aint have
Something beyond you, might be my fad
Ima be the famous one, the bid is on yall
Reminisce, I'm the one kid with it all

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Voted For: Paranoid

Listening...

Paranoid...beat is decent...lyrics are good...flow is a little bit choppy...quality is meh...Lyrics are pretty good, stays on the topic...

Overall, keep it up. Your getting better.

Rev...

Listening...beat is more fitting...wow at your wack quality...learn how to filter better. Wow...your flow is horribly off beat. Lyrics are decent...but ehh at the quality on this...flow is way off.

A'ight...really no contest...not basing this on lyrics because audio is how listenable something is...and sorry Rev, your track was just not listenable.

No hate.

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Voted For: The Revelation

lmfao @ your voice. You sound like a young Mr. Rogers.
lmfao, you sound extremely white. Like, a straight up suburban white person.

ok umm
wtf are you doin?
are you rappin?
you sound like a preacher, lmfao
you're not rappin..at all
roflmao @ this. WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!
"Hitler would still be around killin innocent people and BABIES"
I BURST out laughin with I heard that
first off, this beat, this beat is fuckin gay, no baseline, so you cant rap to it
ROFLMAO, AWW man at this. This isnt even considered rap. This isnt even considered music, at all!
roflmao, aww man
WOMFAO
OMFG
I just heard you fuck up
roflmao,
OMFG
This was horrible, PLUS you went over 5:00. you went like 5:15 or some shit
but yo man, next time you in a topical audio battle, try to rap.
seriouslu, cos you just sound like a preacher that happens to rhyme every once and awhile
SMH

OK, Paranoid
good, Im glad you took the "rap" approach to it
lmao "yes that was meee"
sounded weird
ROFOOFOFOLMAO
YEAH, You're ridin a beat - or atleast tryin to
"kids runnin jumpin on a cat"
WOOOOOOOOOOOOW, ROOOOOOOOOOFLMAO, WTF MAN
Yall niggas
smh, well, this is no joke, Im serious as shit when I say this.
But rap isnt for anyone
LOL @ your addlibs
"uhh huh, yeeah"
lmao
Im listenin while type, so thats why I keep changin shit up
"with who? with you"
ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFLMAO
*DIES*
Fuck it, Im not listenin to the rest, but from what I did listen to, Paranoid got this shit easy as hell. Why? because he actually rapped, thats why. and in a rap song, you supposed to rap. lmfao
RTF on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217377
thanks
Paranoid, you should elevate. Try just spittin some regular shit to a nice ass up tempo beat and see how you do.
Cos you have a chance in audio,
The Rev - you sadly do not


Vote switched

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ok.......lol I didn't understand that but thanks for the vote.

um yea I suppose i could rtf

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Ya, that feed was mostly LMFAO and ish. Why Will is so fascinated with me is scary. Will, you give no feed. You say, LMFAO ahahahah YOU SUCK WhJSEDJDJBNDJB. Seriously man, you aren't stopping me from recording. You are wanting me to record more, so go bug someone else and try to stop the competition with them, cuz you aren't doing ish except giving me motivation.

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You are making me want to record more*............

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