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Old 12-24-05, 01:06 AM   #1
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respect

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yo im writtin this shit 4 my niggaz back in jersey shout outs 2 my brother punch drunk,my nigga py-thon,and all the jersey devils niggaz.pheonix u still my nigga son greedy pete i see you nigga yo listen up niggaz..........

-chorus-

u heard the song money,power,respect,
this my way dirty jersey 2 pay my respect//
from the east 2 da west-from the west 2 da east,
this song 4 all my niggaz all ova the streets//

verse 1

yo lbfam2dafullest i see u greedy pete,
all of dirty jersey,wuts the word on the streets//

da dna bloodline of the jersey devils,
punch drunk we brothas for better or worse,
my mic 2 flow on when i was hit by dat fuckin devil
u saw my hunger 4 rap so u help quinch my thirst//

remember those times we'd go on dat dirt hill n get drunk,
those were the times that mattered to me punch drunk,
we stayed on the block 2 show the world we arent punked,
ridin up the street smokin a joint jams jammin out of the trunk//

i remember when i first moved 2 jersey,
d,kellen,n bubba the first 2 come at me,
when we chill we'd drink n smoke mary//

rollin up,lightin up,was how we'd start the day up,
no stims,sticks or seeds jus pure leaves in da dutch,
stay holdin down a tool and da clutch,
like our fingers were holdin a grudge//

-chorus-

verse 2

nobody comin as sick n twisted as me n nobody,
especially when pyth n po niggaz holdin me,
betta baleeve og & gk foldin these lame mc's,
allik war the jersey rebel,and the jersey devils,
rippin the mic,and changin dikes from tucson to jersey//

december 8th,2000 i cheated death so call me final destination,
everyone everywhere wanna kill me cuz they b hatin,
but niggaz freeze up,when we roll up playin games like this play station,
this the playaz nation,fuck all the playa hatin//

tru niggaz went n visited me in the hospital,
helpin me out n showin me love in any way possible,
those niggaz the reason im still walkin now,
sumtin like a crutch afta the ford knocked me down//

u showed me the ray of light,
2 say fuck da world n stand n fight,
sleep all day n smoke all night,
if ima do this i gotta do it right//


pheonix anotha,close brotha,mutha-fuckaz,
nuttin but real niggaz amongst us,
actin a fool when we was youngstaz,
quote fuck the world blowin out dutchaz//

-chorus-

outro

to all those who doubted us fuck you,
we still here niggaz screamin fuck you,
new jersey yo arizona still trust in you,
thats why i had 2 show my respect 2 you,
nobody can do it quite like we do,
payin my respects cuz i kno its overdue,
and until next time jus kno dat i am proud of u//

yea there you go niggaz had 2 express my gratitude.....
i'll b back in jersey someday niggaz
and fuck the hataz im out...........one!
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Old 12-24-05, 02:00 AM   #2
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Old 12-24-05, 04:08 AM   #3
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217445

there's my second link so blunt'ed plz dont close my shit this time man........cuz i kno u see i dropped 2 links this time peace....uppim 4 votes
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Old 12-24-05, 04:50 AM   #4
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respect is earned, not given

ps, you shouldn't rhyeme the same worde with each other....likke respect and RESPECT, duh

IM fucking drunk and i know that
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Old 12-24-05, 05:00 AM   #5
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lol u shouldnt 2 much but u can.........n i kno dat trust me ive earned plenty of respect from my niggaz in jersey like they have earned mine......jus i live in arizona now ever since i got out the army n we talk everyday online on yahoo n aim and my bro jus sent me his cd by him n his new crew jersey devils so i figured since im suppose 2 b doin this song wit this dude on anotha site i might as well make 1 solely for my niggaz back home so they kno i havent forgotten about them feel me cuz we all been through sum deep shit especially me n they was always there 4 me n i feel like ive kinda abbandoned them.....i wit this girl who cant leave the state so i got a really hard coice 2 make me understand the meaning of this song n its purpose now?holla back uppin 4 more feedback
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Old 12-24-05, 02:52 PM   #6
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not hating, im honestly giving feedback.

you need to elevate..you talked a big game in your little picture shit.

but you came weak man. so far you have done nothing but defend ur self in massive paragraphs...instead of wasting ur time doing that

waste ur time elevating.
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Old 12-24-05, 03:36 PM   #7
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Drop another link or this will be closed


but on another note i reallly think you need to elevate too get your concepts across quick using less words(IS HIGH AS SHYT)basically up your wordplay.
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Old 12-24-05, 07:19 PM   #8
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Quote:
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yo im writtin this shit 4 my niggaz


you looked in the mirror lately?
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Old 12-24-05, 08:57 PM   #9
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yea n the hell wit u people who cry about a white person using nigga...its not the other n word n i aint disrespecting no 1 when i say take the shit wit a grain of salt u b u n ill do me got it?aint no one on here gonna tell me wut to say n wut not 2 say.......i know who i am i know my history do ignorant people honestly know yours?n bone collector wut u talkin about i got 2 links dont i?
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Old 12-24-05, 09:08 PM   #10
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p.s. for all those pussies out there who wanna call my phone n leave fucked up messages grow sum fucking balls n direct them directly 2 me not on my voicemail you fucking pussy....
goddamn muthafuckas say im the bitch yet i got dumbasses leavin messages on my fone talkin shit?who the real pussy?
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Old 12-25-05, 12:11 AM   #11
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ps, you really need to develop a more intricate writing style, use more meaning, enhance your vocab, use descriptive words....cause i read that shit, and it was drrrrrrrry
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Old 12-25-05, 06:03 PM   #12
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Good Thing This Isnt My Best Work....i Know Plenty Of Good Vocabulary.if Blunt'ed Would Of Stopped Closing My Shit Every Tiem I Posted Something Ya'll Would See My Range Of Vocab And Skill But W/e Man People Can I Get Sum Real Feedback?u Kno Return The Freakin Favor?damn Uppin For Feedback Peace
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Old 12-26-05, 04:53 AM   #13
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I come bacc for 1 fuck'n day and i see a pussy like this
plus he cant ryhme,lol
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Old 12-26-05, 06:13 AM   #14
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young drama r u fuckin insane how does dat piece not rhyme?....oh well jus anotha hata added 2 the black box of lossers...peep my diss 4 people like u 1
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