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12-23-05, 03:53 PM
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pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
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How Could You [DEEP TRACK]
IP: 0AC8 1559
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2587829
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2587843 this song for my boi Checkz. holl@Back http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3251979
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12-24-05, 01:54 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Beat sounds deep... Verse comes in...flow is choppy...but it's decent...lyrics seem basic. Vocals are too low, can barely hear your verse. Not feeling the hook... Meh...you have potential, just have to work on things. |
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12-26-05, 04:14 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 145A 71DC
Listenin...
Beat sounds sick..whoa situation is fucked up....beat definately ill... Flow isn't wonderful, but its just choppy make yaself smooth and flowy (sorry for bad descriptive words) and it'll help it out... ya voice sounds fine...i mean nothing to complain about..  chorus comes in..a lil angry, a lil remorseful which is a great emotional hold....but the words / rhymes are basic..simplicity sometimes gets through a point, this just seems a sign of lack of experience maybe?...perhaps i'm wrong... the story is ill...i mean realness is the best way to go...and its all about convincin me you went through this..which you did...which is a good thing.. emotion = great... ...Overall - great beat....mediocre flow with mediocre lyrics...hmmm...just an average track with great emotion...somethin to work on? = flow stay up and grindin tho my fam -Truth-
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12-26-05, 12:43 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
intro is too long, IMO...my mind began to wander
beat is cool ur flow is good delivery is decent lyrics are decent decent track 1 |
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12-26-05, 02:25 PM
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New to RV
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IP: F842 A106
im not replyin cause where the fuck is our track at
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12-26-05, 05:30 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 25DE 02DA
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Beat is fucking beautiful. Vocals are waayy too low man. Flow is pretty good, sometimes sounds a little forced and unnatural...Emotion is really good bro, props on that. I can really relate to this topic, so I'm overall feeling the song. Quality isn't bad, just up your vocals...Hook is ok, not really feeling it, but its decent. Overall, a solid track with room for improvement. RTF on "Loving You" Thanx |
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12-27-05, 02:12 AM
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pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
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IP: 0AC8 1559
Quote:
about to be posted! 
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12-27-05, 04:55 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: A37C 8A3F
Return the favor man...Leave feed on "Loving You"
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