yea i made a new soundclick...people were havin problems gettin to my page when i wasnt online...so i made it more simple...and yea i came back with a new Song also

For the record i didnt Duck on that kids battle...i lost the internet kuzz ya boi dont pay for shit ahhaha so yea...

peep this and tell me what u think and ill return tha Favor...aight?
and for u people who dont know what to do...its da only song on the page...figure it out

www.soundclick.com/nokshuz


my sigs sexy huh

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2612400

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2612401

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beat is nice

flow is generally good

delivery is coo..but voice is monotone


rhyming is acceptable...but could be more intricate


didn't mind listenin

not bad homie


Oh...and maybe only dub ur rhyming words...Im not sure I liked the sound of ur entire verse dubbed and panned that far left....jus my opinion


good 1 tho

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

thankz awaiting more feedback on this right hurr!!

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not bad
nice flow
lyrics were ok coulda been betta
delievery was nice
beat was illy
quality was ight
cept it sounded like u had efex on it
and lmao at tha pakie part of tha beat

overall not a bad track....7/10
keep up dogg nice ish

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