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hit the link in the sig and thank all and anyone for previous support
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218805 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218757
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Bringing back the oldschool hiphop Last edited by Tony.Self : 01-07-06 at 02:00 PM. |
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01-07-06, 02:17 PM | #2 | |||
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vocals need to be amped on the hook...I like ur delivery of it tho...Lyrics need to be simplified so it'll be more catchy...I didn't remember anything from the hook except that u flowed it nicely
ur Flow in the verses was nice to listen to...soundin good there bro I liked this 1 |
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01-07-06, 04:51 PM | #3 | |||||
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lovin the beat...your voice is dope still..im likin your delivery, i dunno y i was expectin u 2 b shoutin n not fit the beat, but the delivery fits well...ur flow is dope, and the rhymescheme complements it...not feelin the effect on the hook fam, kinda muffles it and sounds like a drop in quality, altho it flows well as Q said...2nd verse is flowin as effotlessly as 1st, "the whole word is movin like the earth plate's shift"..dope man...hook u kinda sound like The Game, not sure if thats a gd or bad thing...
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01-07-06, 10:23 PM | #4 | ||||||
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props acuity yea i was kinda fuckin with hook to make it distinguished thanks for tha feed
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01-08-06, 07:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
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01-09-06, 05:13 AM | #6 | ||||||
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luv this beat mate! and the intro was ok, ur delivey was good and all that shit. im feeling ur lyrical quality aswell propa sick track mate keep it up
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01-09-06, 06:55 PM | #7 | ||||||
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^^^^^^^thanks for the feedback
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01-09-06, 07:11 PM | #8 | |||||||
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okay typing as I listen.......k liking beat so far........ok u changed the delivery a bit.....flow is koo....like the change in the delivery but u lackign presence in this track....the hook wasn't much...what was the layered effect u put on it? cuz it hurt hook......again second still same flow which is koo but it jus isn't entertaining to me....prolly shoulda addlibed or had like a punch in bar...u using that softer tone fast like busta....u shoulda had a few bars that u really empahsize a few times in each verse woulda really gave this song that energy it was lacking....overall this is koo..jus not great..jus a average track...but keep dropping stay up fam
Rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...756#post2611756
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01-10-06, 09:47 AM | #9 | |||||||||
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kinda on trip with this one...it's a nice track...you switched ya style from attacking the beat to jus plain riding it which i think you pulled off but you lost that aggresion that you normally deliver on the mic...but nice track overall...lyrically one of the tops...but where you earned better lyrics, the emotion side slipped a bit...perfect the combo...and you'll be even more better fam
keep droppin
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