Just Plain

My rap situation is like evaporation its becoming vapor
The scum say I’m a retard jerk but I do hard work on paper
So think again about my ink pen when I scribble rhymes
Dribble divine on basketball courts never nibble on crime
Shoot a few hoops wearing a new suit with Jordan’s number
My Ebonics chemistry is an electronic industry a shocking wonder
Got bold shoulders like old soldiers show my wound
And go to the tomb put gun in holster with fun bolster fumes
Give partial bows gives martial vows in marriage ceremonies
Rush bold take across the thrush hole saddle coo-chee like ponies
“Look boo I’m shook too but I’m hooked on you wanna a baby
Gonna go crazy with complex sex next we’ll shower oh baby”
Look my rhymes are all bulky and called tall and gawky
But wait a little while show you great brittle style talky
Got much sense and such strength a superman with a trooper
Plan scaly and romantic from the Daily Planet like Clark Kent
My art went over cats head like a caped wonder body parts bent

pretty good for ur first post.mmmmmmm not much i can say, i didnt hate it but i didnt love it either. but still it had some multies, and it was pretty kool.
keep up the work.

see some of my freestyles.

S to the Z

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