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Old 01-30-06, 09:37 AM   #1
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a song that came to my mind when i listened to the beat!

Intro: Me
Verse: Me
Outro: Me

Leave feed i will rtf!
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Old 01-30-06, 09:41 AM   #2
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Old 01-30-06, 09:41 AM   #3
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lol, i know what u mean, cuz this beat made me think of death lol, but yea dope shyt, good lyrics, makes a nigga think, nahm sayin, deliverys aight could be better though, but overall a nice track RTF

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Old 01-30-06, 09:57 AM   #4
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like the beat (only reason why i'm droppin feed) but lyrics were nice and all but you still have that slurry type of vocals which effects ya pronounciation of tracks...sounds like you're forcing the words out...delivery like zuk said could be improved like ya mixing tho deffo better than previous attempt lol...the topics an aight one

you actually remind me a lot of Limited Edition when you rap i.e the stop start flow the slur in ya vocals etc lol...keep droppin though
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Old 01-30-06, 11:22 AM   #5
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Liking the beat, lyrics are straight, but your vocals are kinda muffled. When you record the main track, go back and record again, only the end words that are gonna rhyme. Do you do any mixing? Noise reduction or anything like that?
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Old 01-30-06, 12:10 PM   #6
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Liking the beat, lyrics are straight, but your vocals are kinda muffled. When you record the main track, go back and record again, only the end words that are gonna rhyme. Do you do any mixing? Noise reduction or anything like that?

yes i do lol

upping and thanx!
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Old 01-30-06, 12:30 PM   #7
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Listening...

Beat is coo...

Quality is decent...your highs are very highing...flow is pretty choppyin some places but it's better than before. Lyrics are cool...Liked the outro...Delivery was cool, but it kidna seemed off in a sense.

Overall, decent drop. Keep it up.
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Old 01-30-06, 12:32 PM   #8
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Old 01-30-06, 12:34 PM   #9
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Old 01-30-06, 02:26 PM   #10
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beats cool, intro grabbed my attention. lyrics are good, used some good concepts thru out. Nice emotional track. For a english cat your lyrics are easy to decypher.

Nice track, cunt!
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Old 01-30-06, 05:43 PM   #11
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Kk

Beats Dope



Flows Koo,Falls Off A Lil

Delviery Needs Uppin,Not like Your Usual



EMotions Koo

Like The Dubs Upp Em A Bit Tho



Too Short

overall:7/10

Keep Up

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Old 01-31-06, 04:56 AM   #12
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uppin..............thanx!
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Old 01-31-06, 09:43 AM   #13
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intro is nice

beat is dope

verse:nice flow..u r elevated alot,just hard to understand ur uk accent,dont like ur voice either but u cant do shit about it..lol,lyrics s deep,there s just some effect u r using too much..dunno what s that....u r style is "Un Ique"..lol nah mean

overall dope song...

u r really elevated
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*looks at this post*
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Old 02-01-06, 04:10 PM   #15
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Beat is coo quality seems better than tha last time i heard you son..flow needs some work get that ish perfected nah mean? delivery aswell sall good though all you need is time to perfect yo game keep droppin son...=1=...
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