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Old 02-03-06, 03:36 PM   #1
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When U Collapse (TraGaDe Diss)

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Yall heard the A-Bomb diss...well, after that, his boy TraGaDe got at me...so who am i to back down??? no one, cuz i didnt......

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www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

its called WHEN U COLLAPSE

The sound is a lil off cuz im experimenting wit Adobe Audition trynna work some shit out, prolly hit up some tuts soon....

leave feed ill RTF
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Old 02-03-06, 04:55 PM   #2
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buummmmmppppp.........
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Old 02-04-06, 12:16 AM   #3
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Old 02-04-06, 12:22 AM   #4
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Beginning was ok, but your lyrical content got worse and worse as the song kept going. Your emotion doesn't really fit the verses. You seem to be bored, you need to be hyped up, specially with this beat. Lay off the echoes too. Flow was ok, but with a mainstream beat, that's expected. Work on your breathing too.
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Old 02-04-06, 01:36 AM   #5
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i know wut u mean, its hard to get hyped when u got people 3 rooms away....LMFAO.....

but thanks....preciate it

and i got a shit mic, so the more hyped i get, the louder i get....the shittier the sound.....lmfao..ima work on it
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Old 02-04-06, 02:07 AM   #6
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Well, one thing I did is I stayed away from the mic, but upped the vocals in cool edit. Your quality is decent though.
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Old 02-04-06, 02:16 PM   #7
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first link is invalid fix it
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Old 02-04-06, 02:18 PM   #8
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its work yo... that Trakk Star track??

ive heard that so many times now...shits illy...no need to break it down...lol, ask trakk himself...
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