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Old 02-20-06, 11:01 PM   #1
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LET IT GO... (I'ma Lose It Man)

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222812
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I got more tracks on lockstash than pac has....

LET IT GO!!!


my fuckin guitars are screamin on dis one pce
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Old 02-21-06, 01:29 AM   #2
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your lyrics are def nice....but your voice seems toooooo proper for the aggressive voice your doing this song....im not too comfy with da chorus..its DECENT to da max.....well..sounds like there's someone else on the track??....or u just sound different..im confused...the second verse is alot better i enjoyed dat one a lil more than the first verse third and fourth were aight...how many people were on this song!?!...but um..overall well put together song had its flaws but it was aight

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Old 02-21-06, 02:52 PM   #3
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thanxs ma... two cats i'm on first and thrid but nah my voice aint dat proper i smoke alot
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Old 02-21-06, 11:03 PM   #4
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hahahahaha up ...........................................
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Old 02-22-06, 09:35 AM   #5
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aiight no offence but the scarface samples r playyyyyyyyyedddddddddddddddddddddddddd outttttttttt....
on to the beat beats pretty good kick drum could hit harder IMO...f1st emcee low needs work, content could be betta, IMO if I was U I would do a ton of alliterations,.,,,anywho onto the 2nd dood nice voice and delivery content is MADDDDDD SIMPLE flows good production on both doods could be betta...chorus could of been better IMO
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Old 02-23-06, 05:47 PM   #6
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bump this bitch............................................. ....
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Old 02-23-06, 06:56 PM   #7
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damn you this is a beat i planned on usin in the future, lmao...o well

...nice delivery, i like beat personally, lyrics are iight...this song is pretty nice, the only thign im nto really feelin is the corhus dunno y tho lmao, who is the second guy? anyway ncie job this song isnt bad at all....

coudl ya rtf
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Old 02-26-06, 05:14 AM   #8
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wow you sound a little like chingy, not just your voice but your flow also in the first verse

good flow and hardcore lyrics, all suits the instrumental
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chingy really hahaa.. aight up...............
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