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Old 02-23-06, 03:07 AM   #1
Jay Rose
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yo...i put a free down on a beat im working on a song for....give me some feed back and help the process, what you liked what you didnt like...all that shi....thanks


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Old 02-23-06, 05:59 PM   #2
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Old 02-24-06, 01:27 PM   #3
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I like the beat

vocal quality is sorta muted...needs more highs

Flow fits the beat...delivery needs to be more dynamic to pull it off, though

not a bad drop bro



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