ever since i was small i had a hunger for life...
searching as a kid... and tryna do what is right...
then i lifted the mic... and i gripped it so tight...
slipping tracks, ripping back... its a gift that i write...
give a shit whats in sight... im just here for one thing...
stopping love in my heart... i was blessed that some sing...
what was next to running... was it best to come in...
or just peg and let rest... of the best to jump in...
but i didnt stop there... i got by all the hate...
people worshiping my soul... but couldnt understand fate...
i was garbage to some... i was lesser than good...
all i knew is to pop guns... and hide from cops in the hood
so with all that aside... it was hard to abide...
by the rules of the game... rolling dice to survive...
all the nights that i cried... was it nice that i lied?...
i was ashamed of my name... but at least now i tried!...
in my room in my heart... my 9-5 was writing in a fine art...
in this world in this rapverse... we need creativeness to start...

just key'd this quick to see how ya respond...

yo im really liking this piece right here fam....it was simple and straight to the point.....i cant get out any flaws in this at all so i cant really give u any negatives on it other than it being kind of short but ....u put it down well....structure.... wordplay....concept....it was all smooth and on point....no bullshit this is how i see it...i usually see the battle side of u all the time rippin rhymes dissing others....glad to see another side u brought man...something different for a change....good shit fams 9.5/10 ......~1~

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good looking fam.......

upp'in for more feed.....

a good improvement from what i've seen.....not that impressive by my standards...but considering what you've wrote before..this is the best i've seen from you.

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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thanks... i know it aint noting compare to your recent drop....
but i have tryed to change and focus a bit more on other things then just battling...

i will improve believe me...

thanks again