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Old 03-08-06, 06:57 PM   #1
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How Is This Verse:

I aint even gotta spray the mack,chromed strapped
4'5 will have you breathing faster than a heart attack
Fuck a vest cause I aim for caps...
And my G'z will have Mike Jackson wanna turn back black
Poppin bottles so I take a swig
I aint gotta act gangsta over line nigga read the sig
Even The Law know bout the things you did
Cause when you see me online you go from man to a lil kid
My shells burn like hot rubber..
And we know why you joined C.S cause you's a Cock Sucker
I got a extension like a fuckin cord....
But why trip cause my bitch aint complaining and neither is yours
You's a wannabe and thats my joy...
Why bother to stunt casue you slower than ritarted boyz
Fuck with a G and its your last supper...
Cause that 4'5 will make you niggaz fly like The Wright Brothers


Better than this one:

Its Mistah Cock That Pistol, Yup..Aim & Hit'Cha
I Draw the weapon...& Paint A Perfect Picture..
I'ma Consistant Fixture...Like an NBA Season....
Not the type to Spray
...................................Unless given Reason
I'm so Pleazin on the eye...Both rhymes and Looks
You aint the catch of the day..
.............................Put away your ''Lines & Hooks''
Define you rooks..I'ma pro and Larrys a BIG No-No...
He gots His Strap - on?...
..............................Then whipped out a DILDO
But still-tho...talk is cheap and he cant walk the street
Cause you bring the beef...and I gotta fork & Heat...
So this Pork is beat..theres nothin left But the chops...
he gon be dissin me after this...
.......................................while the rest Givin' Props.
then the Givin stops..No more handouts, Take a mans-route
But if you gonna Box me...
.............................at least last 3 rounds in this Damn-Bout
Now you know what I'm About...take a seat and be morified
Larrys the type to be talkin thug online
.................................................. .....Til he's atleast 45!
I'll let the forty-drive auto pilot...I'm not in control.......
& The only ''Hit'' Larrys had he went & Stole....

?????

I'm not sayin My verse is the dopest thing in the world, And I'm not sayin Tonmys is a whack verse, But I'm failing to see from an emcees prospective, how The first is better than the second....


If it is, and y'all agree......

I'll give props where its due.
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Old 03-09-06, 12:33 AM   #2
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meh its medeoker its average ok i guess but wat do i kno?
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Old 03-09-06, 01:12 AM   #3
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^^nice spelling there, dickchin
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Old 03-09-06, 01:14 AM   #4
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^ yeah wat ever man......................
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Old 03-09-06, 02:06 AM   #5
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medeoker = mediocre
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Old 03-09-06, 04:31 PM   #6
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i kno what ................................now
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