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03-28-06, 10:49 PM
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Keep Marchin Feat. 12 Gauge and Los
IP: 9B89 ED39
yeah man its been a minute since I posted a track on here, this is a track I did with some partners of mine in The Casino Family
order: first(12 Gauge), hook(Lethal GK), second(Lethal GK), third(Los) check it out lemme know what u think http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3481365 I replied to http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2702901 and http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2702912 |
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03-28-06, 11:27 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
i get sick of hearing clips at the begining of songs..beat is dope... good quality...listening...first guy is dope flow is good pressence and emotion are also good... i like the part where the beat slows up sounds dope...lyrics is gutta as fuck...hook is pretty decent it flows good not that catchy ... second dude is good started out with a good flow.. quality sounds off.. flow fell off a couple times lost my attention for a sec... but finished strong...hook is wearing on me i'm startin to like it... last guy i love his flow turn his vocals up... FUCK YOU PAY ME... yeah this cat was the best on the track...damn ya'll nice track.. i gotta give it to ya... get at me sometime... rtf ..mafia stylins
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03-29-06, 12:44 AM
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...Jea...
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IP: A507 B562
i already this gon be hott lol....
....nice beat....1st-lyrics is decent, nice flow,good delivery and emotion im feelin thsi verse, 14? damn 1 yr younger than me, lol....chorus is pretty nice, im feelin the delivery on it....2nd-better lyrically....im likin the flow at the beginning of this verse...ncie delivery as well....3rd-lyrics aitn as good as second or first but im feelin the flow and delivery, all these verses basically got the same feed lol....yall sound good togeva mayne...keep it up his shitt is hott, you gon have to collab wit me sumtime  |
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03-29-06, 02:47 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
alright the beat is mad hot....has that Tony Yayo So Seductive typa feel too it...iono imo it does
First - Real nice flow...quality fits the beat perfect....Delivery was real nice..voice wass cool....pressense stood out the must....good drop.. HOOK - It was straight....the echo thing was offa lil bit Second - Flow stayed solid........pressense was the same..could've used more change ups....but it still was nice...it had a weird effect on it..... Third - had hte best quality......flow changed up which is good....had better clarity.....pressense and delivery was good overall this is a nice lil track put together.....nice lyrics ya'll know what your doing keep it up |
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03-29-06, 07:19 PM
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IP: 9B89 ED39
appreciate the feedback
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03-30-06, 01:51 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: F408 EB1A
damn, I'm diggin' the beat on this shit jo... 1st dude, need to work on his breath control, I heard every gasp for breath he made...flow is tyte..."I'm the best so I'm callin' out the rest" good line in there..."my money might change but I'm stayin the same" another good line...verse was pretty good... hook, should've made it a 4 bar verse repeated to set apart the hook more from your verse, but in general the hook was pretty good man 2nd verse, diggin' your emotion on this a lot, flow on here is sikk...this verse here is some real ass shit man 3rd verse, multies made his verse stand out above the other 2 to me, but his vocals should've been a tad bit louder...flow was nyce on his part cuz it was different from Lethal and set the verses apart nicely...dude has a nyce voice good track here but with the vocals samples at the beginning of the beat, I would've thought this would be kinda political or something...gotta make things fit together better, not just use the vocal samples cuz they sound good, they shold'ved meshed better with the song topic, or it's pointless...overall the track was good though, keep it up, ya'll all got skills
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