Getting on a more real tip. Fuck that candy ass rap most hearing.
We attacking real issues.

for those that dont know, 7th end is my crew/independant label. Recorded roughly 5 months ago. A oldie but yeh.

First verse- Poetic Artist
Hook- Poetic Artist
Second verse- Misc
Third verse- swords
Hook- Poetic Artist


http://www.soundclick.com/2kn

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225140
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225648

Po I can till your gettin better man. Your pronounciation is gettin there but it still needs a lot more work. You need to get more confortable on the mic man, up your delivery, be more strong man. your flow was pretty much there too and the quality.

2nd cat I just didn't enjoy haha

3rd cat wasn't to bad, he doesn't have the voice to rap but he can flow. the lyrics are good but the delivery could use a bit of work for him.

The beat I also didn't like.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

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thanks.
This tracks old as fuck bro. Beats custom made by 7th End. So yeh. Alot has happened since this track was layed.

What's hot:
Flow on both parts were pretty decent to good, if not stock
track was listenable

What's not:

1st cat sounded like he was whisperin
beat is decent, but not real hip hop-ish

2nd cat's vocals sound tunnel like...work on the EQ and editing





Overall:
Decent track...unique sound...just lacked polish


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

thanks for the feed.

upping .