Battle Rules:

10 - 50MAX Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Topic: Breathe

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-08-06 at 05:57 PM

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I Am Unreal. has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-06 05:58 PM.

“Just Breathe”
Broken by greed, set the mind free through gesturing obscenities
Rolled the green and suggestions of questions obscured Christianity
Felt abandoned by God’s presence, blind to his fate, along with learned lessons
The second coming of something for nothing expressed his intentions
A sentence would sum it all up, when down on his knees
Not through prayer, but simple apologies
When you feel like you’re being choked, and the grip won’t release
Don’t fight it, relax, sit back and just breathe.
Isolated by pressure, forced out of the picture by a reaming of lectures
Acceptance is presented through the means of a letter
Knew the potential, the better the marks, the redder the fire
The future brought hope, envisioned riches but death wishes conspired
The desire to be great, in the eyes of the beholder with hopes
Sparked a stone on a boulder, smoldering the papers wrote
So maybe when you feel you’re lungs fill with smoke
Just breathe, go to sleep with the dreams that you broke.
Golden with life, molded as archetype in the essence of honor
In the presence of Heaven’s present pleasant father
Walking on water, the savior of men, their behavior determined what happened next
Refused to believe an imaginary friend, betrayal held the sword to their necks
Contempt to move next, the man rose to believe for those who won’t
And if you’re ready to rise higher, just breathe for the rows that don’t.

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?