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04-11-06, 05:45 PM | #1 | ||||
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Jae Stackz feat. J Crill - Internet Gangstaz ... PROBABLY DEDICATED TO YOU
IP: 3504 3D30
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verse1: J Crill Hook: J Crill verse 2: Stackz Hook 2: J Crill Outro: Stackz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226086 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225903 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225811
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04-11-06, 05:52 PM | #2 | |||||
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yerrrr decent gangsta track yo. the hood hop beats soo sick haha.... J crill's got some nice lyrics, and a sick flow, deliverys alrite aswell, maybe needs to put abit emotion in, but everythin else is there...hooks kool, i like it......intermental, you outshined him on this i reckon, you're multis were real sick on this, and ya flow's always on....your delivery suits this track aswell, kinda grimey haha...lyrics were good aswell, for this type of track..yerr nice track yo 8.5/10
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04-11-06, 05:53 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 3504 3D30
thanks alot dawg.......
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04-11-06, 06:40 PM | #4 | |||
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RTF pls on my new track
What's hot: 1st cat's flow was decent, but the "kill more clowns that jason" was wack..."13 and still a virgin"...He sounded as if he was sayin g that's a bad thing...I disagree... Inter...had good rhyming here...I liked it...slick What's not: beat is too common sounding Hook was irrelevant...didn't remember anything from it Overall: 1st cat has wack lyrics, IMO...Inter did okay...this track needs work...but, I could listen to it. 1 |
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04-11-06, 06:45 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: CD71 1C32
hmmm J crick or w/e I liked his voice and his flow, but he got shaky after awhile his delivery wasn't quite there and idk I just wasn't feel it much. The beat was a good choice though, J Kwon couldn't handle it as good as you did stackz...jae I thought you came in good I like the way you did that lil pause then went in, it was tight. your lyrics weren't to bad man. your flow was hot and as was your delivery. overal decent track....
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292
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04-11-06, 07:13 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: EB0F 1D75
Yo thanks yall rtf'in to both yall now....
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04-11-06, 09:00 PM | #7 | ||||
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ha....damn i started a movement....my 3rd post was like fuck you e gangsters...then j summers, then cho, now you....im a god....oh yea...tracks not bad at all...stacks...your doin alot alot better on the flow...less lisp, sounds more smooth....holla at me owning the site...haha jp
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04-12-06, 11:30 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 762C C3B2
Hhaa word...thanls...1
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04-12-06, 05:36 PM | #9 | |||||||
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beats Koo 1st Duide@: Haha@More Clowns Than Jason Line Flows Nice,Feelin The Way He Rides The Beat Emotions koo,Delivery Could Bee Upped A Lil Lyrics Are Koo Lol Hooks Nice Jae: Flows Better,This Verse Seems More Professional,Deliverys Koo Emotions Nice,Feelin It,Bretah Controls Koo On This LOL You Cant Touch This Haha Lyrics Are Nice Fam...Good Shit Hook.............. Lol@Outro Word Up Good Shit Overall:8.5/10 Holla...1
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04-12-06, 05:39 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 07E4 2EF0
thanks........,....
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