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Old 04-11-06, 05:45 PM   #1
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Jae Stackz feat. J Crill - Internet Gangstaz ... PROBABLY DEDICATED TO YOU

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Old 04-11-06, 05:52 PM   #2
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yerrrr decent gangsta track yo. the hood hop beats soo sick haha.... J crill's got some nice lyrics, and a sick flow, deliverys alrite aswell, maybe needs to put abit emotion in, but everythin else is there...hooks kool, i like it......intermental, you outshined him on this i reckon, you're multis were real sick on this, and ya flow's always on....your delivery suits this track aswell, kinda grimey haha...lyrics were good aswell, for this type of track..yerr nice track yo 8.5/10
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Old 04-11-06, 05:53 PM   #3
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thanks alot dawg.......
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Old 04-11-06, 06:40 PM   #4
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RTF pls on my new track

What's hot:
1st cat's flow was decent, but the "kill more clowns that jason" was wack..."13 and still a virgin"...He sounded as if he was sayin g that's a bad thing...I disagree...
Inter...had good rhyming here...I liked it...slick

What's not:
beat is too common sounding
Hook was irrelevant...didn't remember anything from it



Overall: 1st cat has wack lyrics, IMO...Inter did okay...this track needs work...but, I could listen to it.



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Old 04-11-06, 06:45 PM   #5
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hmmm J crick or w/e I liked his voice and his flow, but he got shaky after awhile his delivery wasn't quite there and idk I just wasn't feel it much. The beat was a good choice though, J Kwon couldn't handle it as good as you did stackz...jae I thought you came in good I like the way you did that lil pause then went in, it was tight. your lyrics weren't to bad man. your flow was hot and as was your delivery. overal decent track....

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292
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Old 04-11-06, 07:13 PM   #6
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Yo thanks yall rtf'in to both yall now....
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Old 04-11-06, 09:00 PM   #7
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ha....damn i started a movement....my 3rd post was like fuck you e gangsters...then j summers, then cho, now you....im a god....oh yea...tracks not bad at all...stacks...your doin alot alot better on the flow...less lisp, sounds more smooth....holla at me owning the site...haha jp
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Old 04-12-06, 11:30 AM   #8
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Hhaa word...thanls...1
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Old 04-12-06, 05:36 PM   #9
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Aigth

beats Koo
1st Duide@:
Haha@More Clowns Than Jason Line
Flows Nice,Feelin The Way He Rides The Beat
Emotions koo,Delivery Could Bee Upped A Lil
Lyrics Are Koo Lol

Hooks Nice

Jae:
Flows Better,This Verse Seems More Professional,Deliverys Koo
Emotions Nice,Feelin It,Bretah Controls Koo On This
LOL You Cant Touch This Haha
Lyrics Are Nice Fam...Good Shit

Hook..............

Lol@Outro
Word Up
Good Shit

Overall:8.5/10

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Old 04-12-06, 05:39 PM   #10
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thanks........,....
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