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04-10-06, 11:09 AM
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"Rainy Days (Last Stand)"...Tight Underground Banger...Leave Links, And I'll RTF ASAP
IP: DB16 D9CD
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...top track. Just went for punch lines over this hard underground beat. Leave links and I'll return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226055 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226086 checked Last edited by will appear : 04-26-06 at 01:28 PM. |
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04-10-06, 12:21 PM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
What's Hot:
Beat...almost like a battle beat...familiar too Delivery is right for this controlled tempo beat...very good there Lyrics/flow are all quality...nothing great, but good What's Not: Dubs are out of sync...Also, I suggest moving the pan closer to center, maybe 25-20...It sounds like you have them at 40-50. It'll make them sound more in sync Hook is delivered well, but I didn't remember anything from it. Overall: Flawed, but good no doubt PS...RTF on my, Cho, and Woody's track "Kill em all" tyvm |
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04-10-06, 02:39 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks...uppin'...I will return the favor.
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04-11-06, 01:59 AM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Whoa...you guys are fuckin hurtin.
Uppin. |
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04-11-06, 11:21 AM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Holy fuck this has been slept on...
UPPIN. I WILL return the favor. |
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04-12-06, 02:33 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
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Upp..... |
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04-12-06, 06:28 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: CD71 1C32
I almost thought it was senser on the intro hahaha, but I could till with your lil english accent there haha. one thing I dislike about your shit that throws off the flow is that you ecko your whole verse I think, and it throws the flow off a lot. if you gonna use the ecko just ecko the dubs so you can hear em behind everything instead of hearing the ecko of the dub plus the verse, it sounds bad. your lyrics are hot and the beat is hot. your delivery is strong. the hook I don't really like that much but it's not horrible or anything. the rainy rainy anyway thing is weird. overall a good track man, probably the best to top your birds in the metal track.
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04-24-06, 11:46 AM
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IP: EEA9 196F
I don't echo my verses, just my dubs. :\ Your speakers maybe..?
Anyways...uppin. |
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04-24-06, 07:14 PM
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IP: 5163 532A
Wow...I left sooo much feed today, and haven't got a single favor back.
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04-25-06, 04:05 PM
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IP: EEA9 196F
And still not a single thing.
Whoa. |
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04-26-06, 12:35 PM
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IP: EEA9 196F
Seriously, I may never leave feed again.
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04-26-06, 10:42 PM
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IP: 5163 532A
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Fuck this shit. |
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04-27-06, 12:47 AM
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IP: 5285 DC82
Playing.
intro is attention grabbing. Flows good bro, lyrics are good, nice concept.. beats cool... Hooks cool man. good quality and mixing bro. nice track. like it. |
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04-27-06, 12:42 PM
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IP: 5163 532A
Thanks for the feed...uppin.
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04-27-06, 03:16 PM
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IP: 3660 0AC7
im feelin this beat soo fuckin much
your flow is cool if u didnt have that slight english accent it wouldnt be as good but the accent kills it..its not so thick where i cant understand what your sayin but thick enough to tell your not from the U.S lyrics are decent im feelin presence and delivery are there only thing to work on is your quality and and keep practicin stay spittin
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