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Old 04-25-06, 01:48 AM   #1
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Live by the gun ft Scott Eti

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http://poeticartist.dmusic.net/

Click the bold "poetic Artist" next to the words, member of. then play it in hi-fi
Scott Eti -First and 3rd verses
Poetic Artist- second and 4th verses
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Old 04-25-06, 01:57 AM   #2
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dude it only plays for a short while like 40 seconds thats it!
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Old 04-25-06, 02:03 AM   #3
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yeh tryna fix it now. fuck knows why that is -_-
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Old 04-25-06, 02:09 AM   #4
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should work now
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Old 04-25-06, 03:40 AM   #6
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Old 04-25-06, 04:34 PM   #7
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^thats fucking gay then.
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Old 04-25-06, 06:43 PM   #8
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^^word the beats DEADLY!.
nice flow i like the emotion put into this!.
wordness nice man i like the flow and rhythm of THIS!
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Old 04-25-06, 10:39 PM   #9
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Thanks for the feed.


upping for mixing tips on vocals levels adlib levels and dub levels and all that good shit.
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Old 04-25-06, 11:06 PM   #10
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Woah,..that beat is fiyah im really feeling that shyt .. ysdat verse was really good flowed well.. good delivery , had alot of feeling behind everything.. Scotti to me i felt you were way to low for the beat..really didnt flow to well but it was still pretty good..overall nice job..keep it up
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Old 04-25-06, 11:07 PM   #11
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where did i hear this beat, i fucking love it, first dudes vocals are to low, but the flow is dope, lyrics are cool too, poetic i dont like how you start your first, its too slow you know, but the rest of the verse its fucking dope, lyrics are cool, flow is cool, this track is pretty cool, nice come in by scott, this track is fire

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Old 04-26-06, 05:03 PM   #12
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Old 04-27-06, 12:58 AM   #13
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Listening...

Whoa...fuckin beat is killer. Gimme gimme.

First verse...I cana ctually hear the vocals well. Flow is kinda start stoppy. Kind sounds like your trying to stretch your words alot to make them flow. It's on beat, but it needs more work. Keep at it though, you'll get it soon enough. Lyrics were decent. Ysdat told me not to judge the production...so I'm not gonna haha. Delivery was fitting.

Second verse...flow was better, though it did fall off beat at some points. Lyrics were good. Delivery was good. Just work on that flow a bit. You'll have it down soon enough.

Third and fourth...same as the first two.

Quality tips:

Learn how to compress your vocals. Makes a HUGE difference. Triple N and Tha Q taught me how to do that shit. What program do you guys use..?

Invest in better mics. If you want to be serious about making music, this is neccessary. Doesn't have to be expensive. Samson CO1U is a very good mic. Condensor mic that does not requre pre amps or shit. Just plugs straight into a USB cord.

Not much else I can say other than keep playing around with things. Quality on this track was on the low side, but I'll leave it at that.

Decent track. Keep it up.
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