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04-20-06, 04:07 AM
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Another Love Song
IP: 9C2B 06EC
my girl told me to do a song for her....n my sappy ass hopped right on it....
aside from the horrid singing at the begining tell me what you think.... AGAIN - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3818463 links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2723911 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226824
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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04-20-06, 08:07 AM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
sorry bro
I can't stand sappy --ish. 1 |
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04-20-06, 11:23 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: F649 9909
some one leave feed...damn
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-20-06, 11:41 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: BFC7 C493
since i luv makin luv songs i'll take a listen to this one..
beats aiight.. lol qualitys okay but tahts cool, thats how i started haha.. lol some notes are flat but its nice try haha.. corny ofcourse, but i guess your girl will luv it lol. verse 1: your flow is solid, delivery is pretty nice and goes with the beat perfectly. Lyrics are good, but should show just alittle more emotion. pretty nice. well lyrics were very nicely put, gj =P feelin everything on here, xept the singing hahaha.. its cool lol.. ur girl will like it.. much props fam.. i didnt drop ne songs in SC but u could check out my "luv" songs at my myspace =P haha.. www.myspace.com/dabatos word much props fam one
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04-21-06, 02:15 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 5F3B 6A14
lol yeah you was right this is just super sappy...
but the flow is pretty decent... like the beat you used too... the best thing line was hot... parts of this lost my interest though... some parts were just too repetitive... over all this was a pretty hot track though... I fucked with it on some... chill wit ya girl type shit... RTF check out: Power Outage
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04-26-06, 01:43 AM
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
uppin.....feed please
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-27-06, 11:38 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
upp she goes....................
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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