http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220454
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227733

I go as far as I last, not in distance
but I push for these cold sarcasm tacts, that
send ya mind back in a state that it lacks
loose wit’ the fuel, I’m abrasive in fact
wit’ each creation of tact, I’m tryna
hit the perfect spot until you’re unable to gasp
the clouds above you are unstable and black
you’re unable to crack, unable to laugh, and
realize that you don’t even know how to act
the proof is in the truth and who do you know tryna challenge that?!
Sit down and pass as there’s no reason to lounge and laugh
I crown the craft where a straight faced statement
leaves ya’ heart achin’ and I’ll drill harder when it starts breakin’
and then the beats act as feet and start this large race when
ya’ outlook’s downhill, no-new-found-thrills
it comes clear that negativity is all that sounds real
that’s when depression sets in and comes large wit’ threats
you crash in which your mental car has sped
karma’s left, and she teaches you there’s large scars to set
stretch ya arm so your fore-arm’ll flex with nothin’ there to arm the flesh
use the blade to race and see how far you get
lyin’ in place, ya eyes steady eyein’ the blade
you’re screamin’ everything in ya head that you’re literally dyin to say
but you fade until ya life runs dry and erased
and suicide is how you died so no detectives tryna try ya case
and anyone juggling death with sarcasm know that I find it great.

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this was an ok drop nothing really special and unique though i liked how you approached you topic and how you leveled out your multies with vocabulary. this was a decent drop homes.

keep it up homes i see some good potential.

RTF on my OM in my sig!.

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good lookin' fam....

up-in-your-girl. ^

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This was a pretty decent drop i felt that it could have been alittle better because you really had no imagery, and no feeling or any very deep emotions going into your drop..i mean you had your creativity down but other then that it was a decent drop..keep it up.

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