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06-16-06, 11:03 PM
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....Modern Times.....
IP: 3C62 382D
This is a tribute 2 the Lambs being led to Slaughter Dedicate this to the Mothers who lost a Daughter The Sons who Lost a Father..The Blind who lost Site The Victims of Aids and Breast Cancer who lost the Fight They say Jesus Is Truth...But let us hurt & Pain And didnt show His Face in that Man Made Hurricane Left us with Hunger and Strain and Miles of Rain Told us to keep our faith..thru all the stress and Strain But in the end the goverment gets the last Laugh Instead of Predicting it thru Math...they Upped the Gas Ive heard it all Before...from Dictators like Stalin & Hitler Got Poor Kids from New Orleans..Writing The White House askin "Why dont i have a House Mister" Media and Newspaper dictators callin them Refugees Streets Riddeled with Disease and Homes Broke from Trees But your Constantly on Vacation when im fuckin Homeless Fuck America & its Leaders...Africa's My Home..More or Less Just because you read it Doesnt fuckin mean its Right Injected Hormones Into the Ozone Even got Mother Nature Fed up and Takein a Strike Its gonna take more than the Pockets from Phill Drummin To get us Motivated...I mean Damn Even Ray Charles and Stevie coulda seen this Comin Ni99az worryin bout Panties and whats under a fuckin Bra Need 2 Be Worried Bout Bush Movein us Into a Martial Law Imposed on a Civilian Population especially in time of war I mean Even ask a Vietnam Veteran on the shit They Saw and they'll even tell you we fightin a Fight thats not Ours It Digs into so Much more...Start with Masons and Mores *Fuck the Govt and Faith my People Need Freedom Dont Believe Lincoln..Its Kennedy who Freed Um They Tell us to Put our Faith In G...Live Like Me But i cant See.....Because im Still Broke & Not Free*X4 Its time we stand up and get some fuckin Motivation Thugs Need Hugs?..Need to open a Book get an Education Open your Brain..expose your thoughts thru Speculection Do your research next time you pick Cousins in an Election Do some research and Revise the Order of Skulls and Bones Do some Homework Homes and Notice Washington doin a Devil Pose on the Throne And from what they tell us...its a Sign from texas..I Rememba Do u believe that? do you...because washingtons from Virgina Wyclef said Ill be gone to November......well Junes December @ the rate were going.....Summers gonna switch with Winter Property Crushed..Ambulances and Police Rushed...Time Spent But took Bush Longer than it take a Ni99a 2 pay his car note & Rent They Laughed @ me when i said were fucking Blind to the Masses But Columbus Didnt discover america but thats wha they teach us in Classes Its all a Dimocracy to push the Wealthy unhealthy into Poverty How can we be free...when WE have 2 pay for our own Property? *Fuck the Govt and Faith my People Need Freedom Dont Believe Lincoln..Its Kennedy who Freed Um They Tell us to Put our Faith In G...Live Like Me But i cant See.....Because im Still Broke & Not Free*X4
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06-16-06, 11:22 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2771729
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2771735
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06-17-06, 09:37 PM
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IP: 5904 E9D2
This was pretty tight ... i was really feeling it , it could have been alittle better in certain places but overall it was hot.. i was feeling the structure..you had lots of good emotions and very good feeling ... only thing that i didnt like was the vocabulary usuage it was very simplicit but overall nice job.
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06-18-06, 09:18 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 2DB4 52D5
incredible...this was a very tight OM..
yeah the whole thang was flowing so well ..vocab was just  ...concept was clear...i got ur point and it was just nice to see something different from the usuals on rv plus u did it all by urself...that's a plus mayne..keep them coming...i like it..by the time i was done reading it was like i just came bak to earth after trooping into the mind of someone..meaning i was feeling the emotion...this was definitely cool...nice job pa!
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06-18-06, 02:13 PM
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IP: 3C62 382D
Thanx 4 the love ya
ima keep droppin em
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