checkin..............16

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2776460
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2776837
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230196
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2777297

I'm in there like swimwear 16 .goood luck

ya finished home boy, gettin ya thrown out this round quick
Losing's a bitch, and you've committed to fathering her kids
im knockin son out easier than what the mavs did to phoenix
cuz ya verses are so run down,
it's something The Rock wouldn't be seen in
u get no play hobo, every bitch is through with ya
'specially since Sonny D hangs with more kids, Kool Aid is suein ya
fuckin joke, u keep milking for votes....we'll keep skimming ur verses
since ur wackness is fucking disgusting...when u do it perverse kid
listen Sonny, u wanna be noticed, u need to start doin a better job
how u plan to gain respect, when u got the same name as a dog
give ya text arrest dude, ya garbage lines are a crime fag
& u swear i got antilock brakes how my fists stomp on a dime bag
i roll with a pump gauge, this chumps brave, 'till i crunch his spine
when i shoot thru you, leaving more holes than your punchlines
with ur lazy attempts, arms resting.....im resorting to violence
so it just makes it easier for me to escort you to ya vile end
Kemp, just gimme the W, cuz this punk really hasn't been a problem
cuz my KO hooks swing left, givin him an L on the right side of the column

Lets Do This,,
Fuck this cat kill him wit no remorse, no jokes/
when i pull my finger only thing stinkin is ya corpse/
Stay strapped,kid persperatin I'll pull it/,catch him on
a hott day,and have him sweating bullets/
And I'll be rolling through wit guns blazin to greet ya/
your names all over a tombstone,and you aint eating pizza/
You know Sonny be forever on the grind,/
Your girl was blowin "Bags",then I sold her a dime/
Cuz Writechas gonna be a virgin till his death /
chicks wouldnt Blow "Out",if they was holdin there breath/
For victory i celebrate by drivin wit u tied to my spoiler/
From Canada huh?Well after this battle u can feel like an Oiler/
Man Ill spit live and be a giant like Shockey,I get cocky/
This kid would stutter and say "Cut me Mic", like a beat up Rocky/
Can't lose to this sucker, Ill unload the gage on this fucker/
and roll past him fast wit my 16 like a road raged trucker/

ya finished home boy, gettin ya thrown out this round quick
Losing's a bitch, and you've committed to fathering her kids
u get no play hobo, every bitch is through with ya
'specially since Sonny D hangs with more kids, Kool Aid is suein ya
give ya text arrest dude, ya garbage lines are a crime fag
& u swear i got antilock brakes how my fists stomp on a dime bag
Kemp, just gimme the W, cuz this punk really hasn't been a problem
cuz my KO hooks swing left, givin him an L on the right side of the column

VS

Can't lose to this sucker, Ill unload the gage on this fucker/
and roll past him fast wit my 16 like a road raged trucker/

V./ out easy.

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1-0...uppin...............

roflmao@out

out won this, v: out

his verse was clearly better, nice try thou sonny

2-0...uppin

thx for the votes

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Decent battle here.

At first glance, i thougt Sonny's verse was gonna be garbage because of the slashes at the ends of the lines...coz who does that anymore? But he had some decent lines in there like the tombstone, blow out, and trucker lines. Nothing in Out's verse really stood out as dope to me. But it was consistantly "decent" from start to finish. There were a couple of nice lines in there like the sonny d, and stop on a dime lines. Sonny's weaker lines hurt his own chances of winning...he had a chance tho.


vote - out

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ya finished home boy, gettin ya thrown out this round quick
Losing's a bitch, and you've committed to fathering her kids
u get no play hobo, every bitch is through with ya
'specially since Sonny D hangs with more kids, Kool Aid is suein ya
give ya text arrest dude, ya garbage lines are a crime fag
& u swear i got antilock brakes how my fists stomp on a dime bag

vs

Cuz Writechas gonna be a virgin till his death /
chicks wouldnt Blow "Out",if they was holdin there breath/


v/out. much more consistent and came better with the punchlines. sonny just isnt on out's level.

Upping for votes.

4-0...uppin for more votes

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