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"A Goodnight's Sleep"


Left feed on Tha Q's "Someday" track and Shere Kaughns "Grinidin" track.

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beat is familiar...again


flow is consistent throughout

good rhymes

good lyrics

delivery becomes monotonous at times tho

quality is ample

Good drop


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Thanksssssssssss

Upping like a flupping

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LOL to many people been using this beat. LE, Ike and you now. but it's a ill beat though, but anyway to the point. Your lyrics are pretty tight man, delivery is up and down a lot which I like. The flow was pretty solid and you kept goin on for a long minute, damn. I like how you kept goin through the hook part there, it sounded pretty cool man. overall this is a good track but not one of my fav's from you.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629

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hmm wonder where u got this beat from?...

dope shit though

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peepin...

i aint heard the beat b4 so its fresh for me...

the verse is heavy kid.... deep lyrical content... "walkin through the forest just to watch the trees divide"....

hook:... nice sample... fits perfect.. im not sure if you sampled this yourself or if it was already on the beat... but its a dope ass sample...

2nd verse:...... that last breath flip was DEEP!!!!!!!!!! sick!!!

overall i love this track!!! for real... i mean... its deff diff from what people usualy drop on these boards.... this i a real emotional jump off... and you realy deliver the message here... i mean... it wasnt self glorification... or nothin like... it was like ... some real hip hop... and your production is hott on this.... libs over this mixed perfectly....

damn... maybe just a good nights sleep would have changed your troubled mind...
now pain is what youve given.... and sleep is what you get...


DEEP


keep dropin shit like THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!


-Don Tito Bronsky

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

Haha, thanks man.

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To the top, I move the rock
Because in my shoes is rocks
I sing blues with cops
So remove your socks before I
Use the glock on you stupid cocks

OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH

Uppin.

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aiight bitch, here goes nothing.....

beat is ncie. Like that shit. wordlife this is basic thuganomics and shit like that

anyways,

first verse is tight. like the flow and delivery. had some dope ass lyrics. forest line was nice. good shit in this verse. all there

hook, is dope. liked how it was done. gave track tight ass vibe

2nd, verse, same shit as first. everything's on lock. good ass flow and shit man. like you really brought it. haven't heard you in a while. but damn son good shit.

overall dope ass track here yo. keep it up. 9/10 stay up.

EZ

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:love:

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Listenin' im feelin the beat alot..intro is real too..damn I like how you came on..real good delivery and energy

flow is really good too..lyrics good too hmm i cant find a flaw..I like all the real tracks you do fits you atall..."candles and desk move" that line was tight..

Hook is nice I liked the sample..didnt Ike use this?..

same as 1st nothing wrong..crazy lyrics..."when I open their book, their cover is blown"..woah..."with every sentence I say my honesty grows"

mad quotobles this track is audio of the month..probably

9.4/10

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Yo I know you aint gotta but cud u please peep this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230835

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SpuL - 10/10
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Speats - 20/10
and more

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I like the beat real nice

Ok man...flows real nice,this is like smooth but the end words get more energy,this is why i like your delivery..man your lyrics are real nice,lots of real deep shit...makes me reflect on shit,bringin shit up...i like your rhyme scheme and how it varys,makes it more enjoyable,real nice....feelin the emotion,it just sounds nice,you one of the cats who wouldnt need dubs BUT i love the way you spit your dubs..it adds a lot to your verse which would have been lost i think,your presence is dope...like normally,seems you not afraid to stand and spit,real nice...mann this is mad long,but yeah its madd nice,im gonna download this if its on MP3 download...i love how your emotiopn fluxuates..you got a lot of strong points in this track,i think your flow is the best ive heard outta you...you upped your game madd.....Yeah man,i like this a hell of a lot because you using many different abilitys to make it blend real nice man...i also love your voice haha

Can you RTF here:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230833

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OYD MAFIA