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Old 07-16-06, 12:04 PM   #1
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5. N.Tavarez (7-1) vs 6. pictureperfect2 (5-3)

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Old 07-16-06, 12:57 PM   #2
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12 lines or so.....................................
i dont want chrit voting at all

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Old 07-19-06, 09:27 AM   #3
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let me know now if you gonna no show
if not im dropping later today
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Old 07-19-06, 07:14 PM   #4
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im showin........................
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Old 07-20-06, 04:33 PM   #5
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231725
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231740
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231721
i owe a vote
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wtf I get a bye week? no matter Im gonna whore you
Thanks for no showing Chrit, I got a cheeseburger for you
You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
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Originally Posted by Indeph
rofl @ your missing W, I love it
Quote:
Originally Posted by pictureperfect2
/ord, shit sucks... my lil 2 year old nephe/ got to my shit... ganked the "e" too but i found it LOL

Excuses we dont need em or believe that shit
You wouldnt see the "W" even IF you got the key back, bitch
Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
Picture Perfect winning, yeah right Im stomping his ass
Shit even your name implys that you'll be ' gone in a flash'
...........See Im a pimp, I dont follow these birds
but it got ya chick talking bout my dick 'Til she swallow her words
Frustrated cuz he's stuck on a site that never knew em
So while he vents....I'll just uppercut his head right thru one
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Old 07-20-06, 10:25 PM   #6
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my punches will kill this hoe.. yo i told you not to start G
ya nose'll be set off so much.. clubs need ya face to start a party
im not scared of this ex champ.. boy gettin cracked like an egg
ya, i'll stand up to shit so fast... bitch'll try runnin down my leg
not knowin if u a guy or girl doesn't make u smart.. but except it T
u sittin down to PP so much.. ya sex could get into jeopardy
Dope fuckin punches that leave all mexicans goin scared
Yeah, I had a nasty stash of’em.. till ya upper lip started growin hair
Fuck outta here, U CAN’T SEE ME BITCH.. im a souldier
Nah, invisible lines won’t work on hot, but neither will a border
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs
fuck it im i gotta leave and go to a club.. dude waitin in a van
i'm really rushin this this shit like hot when he see's a taco stand
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Old 07-20-06, 10:33 PM   #7
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You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
Picture Perfect winning, yeah right Im stomping his ass
Shit even your name implys that you'll be ' gone in a flash'

VS.

not knowin if u a guy or girl doesn't make u smart.. but except it T
u sittin down to PP so much.. ya sex could get into jeopardy
Fuck outta here, U CAN’T SEE ME BITCH.. im a souldier
Nah, invisible lines won’t work on hot, but neither will a border
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs


OH SHIT!! Hot you came pretty weak in this battle and fuck man, picture came with some fire. Honestly, I have you both tied with quotables and shit. Both verses were pretty much even for me so when I vote I've got to give it to the dude who had the best bar of the battle.

Shockingly, in my opinion anyway it was pictureperfect2... that fucking border line even though it has been done on Tavarez before (concept-wise) it fucking made me crack up. As soon as I read it I fucking burst out laughing.

Sorry, Tav... I think that you underestimated picture this week, either that or you just rushed your verse because I know you could've done a lot better.

V/ - pictureperfect2
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Old 07-21-06, 12:03 PM   #8
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You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
Excuses we dont need em or believe that shit
You wouldnt see the "W" even IF you got the key back, bitch
...........See Im a pimp, I dont follow these birds
but it got ya chick talking bout my dick 'Til she swallow her words
Frustrated cuz he's stuck on a site that never knew em
So while he vents....I'll just uppercut his head right thru one
(8)

v.s

not knowin if u a guy or girl doesn't make u smart.. but except it T
u sittin down to PP so much.. ya sex could get into jeopardy
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs
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Overall this battle was aiight. hot came coo, Picture just came alright. I'ma say it now. BORDER LINES ARE PLAYED!!! I don't care how you spin it, it's still been played to deah on Taverez, and for one thing. HE AINT EVEN FUCKIN MEXICAN!! So it's also a false punch. but other tha that picture had some coo concepts. Hot came coo i liked his swallow her words like the best. but overall Hot got it with a good margin I think.

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Old 07-21-06, 03:34 PM   #9
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Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
...........See Im a pimp, I dont follow these birds
but it got ya chick talking bout my dick 'Til she swallow her words
Frustrated cuz he's stuck on a site that never knew em
So while he vents....I'll just uppercut his head right thru one

vs.

U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs

this was a weak battle. pp, you didn't have really anythin i liked. alot of that shit was a bunch of play'd and poorly worded mexican jokes. wasn't feelin it tto much at all. tavarez, we've all seen u come ALOT better than that. but it was enough for the win. pretty one sided battle here.. pp, start leanin how to word some punches and look for witty/fresh punches to. and tav, no explanation. you know what ur doin, just drop better next week.

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Old 07-21-06, 04:18 PM   #10
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WORD I WILL
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theres ^^^^ my fourth link even though i'ma keep voting
2-1
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Old 07-21-06, 08:34 PM   #11
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2-1 hot..... uppin
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Old 07-22-06, 12:20 AM   #12
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You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
...........See Im a pimp, I dont follow these birds
but it got ya chick talking bout my dick 'Til she swallow her words

vs

not knowin if u a guy or girl doesn't make u smart.. but except it T
u sittin down to PP so much.. ya sex could get into jeopardy
Fuck outta here, U CAN’T SEE ME BITCH.. im a souldier
Nah, invisible lines won’t work on hot, but neither will a border
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs


I saw this battle pretty close, but i felt PP took this slightly based on the rest of Hots verse was weak but i felt rest of PP's was fairly decent, played concepts none the least but decent. so Picture Perfect gets my vote. `pz
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Old 07-22-06, 12:43 AM   #13
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You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
Excuses we dont need em or believe that shit
You wouldnt see the "W" even IF you got the key back, bitch
Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
Picture Perfect winning, yeah right Im stomping his ass
Shit even your name implys that you'll be ' gone in a flash'

vs

not knowin if u a guy or girl doesn't make u smart.. but except it T
u sittin down to PP so much.. ya sex could get into jeopardy
Fuck outta here, U CAN’T SEE ME BITCH.. im a souldier
Nah, invisible lines won’t work on hot, but neither will a border
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs

vote-N.Tavarez, since this is the weakest verse Tav's posted, he still managed to get my vote, cuz his personals outweighted his punches.
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Old 07-22-06, 10:39 AM   #14
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You battled Da Sein<-- he didnt vote, now that leads me to think
Your only chance of winning just dropped with my verse and those links
Fuck a bandaid, I'ma dice him with sheers
Cuz when Im done with Dissin'fect, this ngga wont need peroxide for years
Picture Perfect winning, yeah right Im stomping his ass
Shit even your name implys that you'll be ' gone in a flash'

VS.

Fuck outta here, U CAN’T SEE ME BITCH.. im a souldier
Nah, invisible lines won’t work on hot, but neither will a border
U aint got shit on me, no pun intended...but I like the odds
Cuz U diggin up so little dirt…
…………………ya family go’n lose their landscaping jobs

Gotta admitt PP came at you pretty good Tav...He almost got you...but I just feel your qoutables were a notch up from PP's sorry pic you had a chance tho nice drop big surprise.

Vote - N.Tavarez
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Old 07-23-06, 10:57 AM   #15
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N.Tavarez wins 4-2.

N.Tavarez wins (8-1)
pictureperfect2 loses (5-4)
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