Eazy...

how many lines you thinkin man....14ish?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232185
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232192
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232181
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232193

14 will work. Easier...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232192
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232184
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232193
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232191

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I might need a few hours extension cause I'm at my boys house and I had some of my verse typed at my crib

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No probs, its ok...but

its simple – a bitch wont win this, so to even try you shouldnt...
you need balls to post first against me…so I understand exactly why you couldnt
& I wont need to whine about the result you little feeble louse
so when I say outcomes a bitch…
…………its just a reference to what people say when you leave the house!!




your just whack and shouldve left! & for a bit I thought shit you would…
you must have had second thoughts…
……………..’cause if you spent a good minute you wouldve quit for good
then again kids shout your name Rell, hard believin’ that….
‘cause they all love to scream So!…followed by shit, crap of even whack!
you dont wanna fuck with me, you better be listening man
‘cause the way this kidneys yo face…will leave you pissin’ your pants
bitch, your an ugly twat & in this battle theres no looking back…
your skill level isnt mediocre, its just that we all know your so-so…fucking whack
your lonely, no one likes you plus theres nothing you ever bring
but no ones callin’ you bitch…& that explains why your fucking phone never rings
I can just bet your homo & wouldnt touch a girl that has a fanny…
so if I saw this man stroke woman…that would just be me describing him as a tranny
you must have a bad sex life & I know you tend to stick with dicks….
because when archaeology goes wrong….is the only time Relics a bitch
while on the mic I leave girls excited…plus you know its true son
but even you leave them at the edge of their seats…
………………………………………thats just before they fucking run and do one!

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Eh...ok homie gud luck

VOTE!

Up over no-shows.

wtf

Someone needs to vote

dont worry i got you, ill edit a explained vote later...i just woke up.

& I wont need to whine about the result you little feeble louse
so when I say outcomes a bitch…
…………its just a reference to what people say when you leave the house
while on the mic I leave girls excited…plus you know its true son
but even you leave them at the edge of their seats…
………………………………………thats just before they fucking run and do one!

that last one i quote wasnt all that good but it made me laugh, i thought some of ya concepts for kinda coo liked that kidney one & when you nameplayed on him on your 3rd or 4th bar, but i felt it coulda been worded better....but overall i think you came decent....and whats up with talking about his sex life/ and cant get a woman kinda shit (last couple bars of ya verse) dont talk about that so much...


vs

Slick your Pathetic, at least Mime knew he was guilty, but you dumb bitch.
Takin your own Played Concepts then usin the Antonym of it.
I'm a Battle Emcee I drop Artist, Hold on, Stop...Pardon.
When I say your the Pick of the Litter means that your HOT...Garbage.
Yea she's a known a dirty slut - Damn even Spongebob hit her fast.
So if your nasty ass fucked, you better hope you Mr. Crabs.
LMAO
...& Your a fuckin lame ngga, you really need blessins.
Lookin for your Delivery so long...SlicKnife had to be a C-Section.

goos shit comin from SoRell, i was feeling his more than slickknife...some of ya punches made me laugh and they came hard liked the spongebob one, shit was funny....i would say this was 1 sided cuz slick had some good shit aswell but So Rell took this by far....no hate to none of you just posting my vote., good battle from both keep it up

vote-So Rell

finally a vote

uppin for more

Woah....

need more votes here

its simple – a bitch wont win this, so to even try you shouldnt...
you need balls to post first against me…so I understand exactly why you couldnt
your just whack and shouldve left! & for a bit I thought shit you would…
you must have had second thoughts…
……………..’cause if you spent a good minute you wouldve quit for good
your lonely, no one likes you plus theres nothing you ever bring
but no ones callin’ you bitch…& that explains why your fucking phone never rings
I can just bet your homo & wouldnt touch a girl that has a fanny…
so if I saw this man stroke woman…that would just be me describing him as a tranny
you must have a bad sex life & I know you tend to stick with dicks….
because when archaeology goes wrong….is the only time Relics a bitch

vs.

I'm a Battle Emcee I drop Artist, Hold on, Stop...Pardon.
When I say your the Pick of the Litter means that your HOT...Garbage.
I got bitches yes Fucked them all, Yours too but never fucked her raw.
Johnny Cochran didn't have to get me off the way she Cuffed my Balls.
Yea she's a known a dirty slut - Damn even Spongebob hit her fast.
So if your nasty ass fucked, you better hope you Mr. Crabs.
...& Your a fuckin lame ngga, you really need blessins.
Lookin for your Delivery so long...SlicKnife had to be a C-Section.

this was a pretty good battle. enjoyed the punches and rhyme schemes both ya'll had. slick, you had some pretty dope shit.. i liked the relics line the most.
the rings/bitch line was dope. and ur opener was real nice.. dope shit man. rell, you had some good shit. dope punches and stuff, but u also had alot of played material, gassed up line, the star wars one and ya closer was just weak. but ya did have the mr crabs line and the c-section shit. garbage line wasn't bad either. so yea, not a bad verse.

v/ SlicKnife

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