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Old 07-25-06, 02:00 AM   #1
Past Tense
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Welcome To The Northwest(CRACK MUSIC)

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this shit is FUCKIN CRACK YO!!!

1-Balance
hook-balance
2-Shamroc
hook-balance
3-Me
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PEEP GAME AND DROP LINKS AND i'll leave feed


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Old 07-25-06, 04:56 AM   #2
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balance - this cat reminds me of a less polished version of F.A.T. .. nice tho. real smooth like, nice flow. lyrics was aight. nothin really jumped off, but i liked it cause the flow and simple changing rhyme scheme was good.

hook - its cool. just changed a phew words from original version.

shamrock - eh lackin when compared to other to cats. not bad tho. sound like they just started spitten. not bad. flow was aight. lyrics was lackin a lil bit, but we all need work right ?. not a bad effort.

past tense - for some reason i always thought you would sound way different.
flows on point till the very end. lyrics straight. solid verse overall. fit the track very well. nice drop


Solid track man
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Old 07-25-06, 05:17 AM   #3
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^^word up thanks for the feed fam

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Old 07-25-06, 05:31 AM   #4
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yep......

balance is nice flowise n all....quality should be upped a bit...like a hiss redux or something.....
blazer....dixion is illy....hometownnnnnnnnnnn

secondcat sounds like j summers....but his flow drops too much....n needs to work on anunciation of some words....


and you.....
your quality is better then theirs...your voice is louder...sounds better but weird when mixed with theirs.....you should a lil like your rushin, you could be a lil more relaxed on it....but good shit....you coulda ended your verse better but good shit....not a bad remix n shit....good stuff
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Old 07-25-06, 05:34 AM   #5
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thanks for the feed fam

I plan on re-doin my verse soon cuz i was too tired and i just went through quick
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Old 07-25-06, 05:39 AM   #6
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 07-25-06, 02:42 PM   #7
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uppin this shit
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Old 07-25-06, 03:23 PM   #8
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LOL i used this beat ages ago named "Welcome to Charlotte"....

1st MC- yo nice shit man....tha vocals sound a lil weird...but it still fits.......flow delivery is strate.......

Hook - nice gets da point across

2nd MC- flow is strate but ya vocals like above has some weird filter

3rd MC- shit came boomin , quality's crispy as fuck...shit ya should teach ya boiz how to mix man........flow and all that shit is fine.......u came the hardest out of all of em....

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Old 07-25-06, 06:02 PM   #9
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dunno if you fed on my link or not yet, but here it is http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232145

preciate if you do
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Old 07-25-06, 06:18 PM   #10
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^^^aight i got you

ayoo i got one of ur songs download that needs a verse still you mind if i spit on it?
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Old 07-25-06, 06:23 PM   #11
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Its your world son - i dont care. actually i'd appreaciate it haha
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Old 07-25-06, 06:25 PM   #12
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aight its the song "the show" it says Missing the third verse..
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Old 07-25-06, 09:22 PM   #13
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Old 07-25-06, 11:10 PM   #14
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Old 07-25-06, 11:14 PM   #15
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Production

The production is cool. Good Quality. Your adlibs matched the main vocals on all emcee's..Hmm the volume was good. I could understand every word. Which is good!. the beat on some real OLD school shit. i dont really like this beat but i could work with it. Production. is cool. overall on production 8.5/10

1st verse

Ok well 1st verse had good quality. and the flow and multi's were the standout in this verse. nice shit here. The emotion was cool for this track. and good pronounciation. this verse cool in my opinion overall 8.1/10

2nd verse

Umm that quality is booty. and the flow was off at time. other then that this shit was decent. It was ok. flow was on and off. hmm. I cant write no more 6.2/10

3rd verse

best verse on this track. nice flow and the quality is fuckin fire. Your multi's were good. nice emotion and the pressence was there. this shit was nice. best out of the 3. 8.7/10

Umm overall the 2nd dude killed the track. should either fixed his quality or get somebody else in there. LOL.

7.6/10 overall

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