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Old 08-08-06, 03:11 AM   #1
wiley d
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it all ends now

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this is the day tears stop falling from my eyes
cause these niggas aint putting me down nomatter how hard they try
all the shit ive been through and im only fifthteen
and that aint stop my mind frame that im in every bitch dream
im the souldier type ,nobody can fuck with me
god put me in this world now everybody's stuck with me
the game never change ,so everyday i hold down that G.S gang
we making money so yall know we rockin that G.S. chain
and we all soldiers so yall know what all that b.S.(BullShit) bring
i put weed in my system for all the niggas that couldnt move on with me
but today is the day i stop the sadness and start to get me
cause niggas is looking at me like im a whore so everybody tries to bitch me
so its time to start being a soldier again and stop acting friendly

niggas is clogging up my ear,with all that bullshit i hear
yall niggas is clowns to me cause loving is the only thing i fear
talkin shit behind my back then they all quiet when i get there
fuck the beef shit i dont need drama in my life
and i cant sleep at times because im thinking about the problems in the night
and im always thinking about pussy so i keep condoms in my sight
this is basicallly my life ,except ima go back to the old me and do it right
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Old 08-08-06, 06:05 PM   #2
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you need to post 2 links man or some mod will close this thread.. but this wasnt too bad, seemed simple and shit, could have used more creativity here and there and a better rhymescheme, but Im guessing this was meant for a audio or your just new to text or whatever. either way keep dropping dude. pz
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