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Old 08-27-06, 03:34 PM   #1
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27. Out Writechas (0-0) vs 28. SMG (0-0)

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Old 08-27-06, 03:47 PM   #2
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checkin............
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Old 08-28-06, 12:08 PM   #3
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Old 08-31-06, 11:45 PM   #4
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i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down
u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash
n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax
you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects
so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics
say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets
videotaped it...
n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley
claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy
cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy
keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit
n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch

blah
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Old 09-01-06, 02:01 AM   #5
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bitch ass...i saw you online and u didn't even post

fuckin slut
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Old 09-01-06, 02:04 AM   #6
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Oh, nah, I'm still on...I'm tryna hurry up and come up with somethin' right now...
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Old 09-01-06, 02:12 AM   #7
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This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...

...sorry man, but they tellin' me that we gotta shut the comps down now...take it or leave it...
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Old 09-01-06, 09:15 AM   #8
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i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down
wak with self glorification
u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash
n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax
wak
you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects
so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics
YOur wording sucks , this bar was weak man.
say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets
videotaped it...
n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley
dawg ...cant you come up with anything decent?
claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy
cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy
WTF? this is making me mad ...your wak man
keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit
n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch
OMG ...this was wak

I have nothing to say

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This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
decent nameplay...not good but decent
You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
good nameplay but bad poorly written punch
And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
LOL ....Nice
A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...
[/B]Decent punch brah.

SMG took this pathetically easy. [B]

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Old 09-01-06, 11:12 AM   #9
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^ i read ur verse to see whut credibility u have of callin my shit wack..and u don't have none, i agree with kemp when he says u don't deserve to be 4-0...

so whutever... 0-1
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Old 09-01-06, 12:00 PM   #10
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well...Im thinking maybe you rushed your verse or some shit, or maybe your where to lazy to write anything decent ...thats all you...I understand no one waists most they good shit in the cypher so I also aint seen nothing hot from you there either. I'll just wait till next week or the week after to see if this was just a bad week for you. No hate or nothing dawg and mybad if it came off that way. G'luck.
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Old 09-01-06, 01:59 PM   #11
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OW :

Nothing really to quote...

Your verse was really badly worded, the optics punch was borderline at best and that was it...

SMG:
And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video

That shit was funny, easily won the battle. You had some decent punches but 'wording' is a big key in this leauge and urs was sub par... decen shit though.

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Old 09-02-06, 01:00 AM   #12
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Out-i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down

SMG-And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video

Umm yeah this battle wasnt that tight but by more creativity SMG got it
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Old 09-02-06, 01:25 AM   #13
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This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
o.k
You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
no
And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
nice lol
A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...
meh


i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down
o.k
u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash
n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax
no
you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects
so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics
coulda been better
say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets
videotaped it...
n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley
no
claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy
cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy
meh
keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit
n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch
nice

v/smg for more consistency
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Old 09-02-06, 10:50 AM   #14
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This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
....weak...
You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
...Decent....
And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
.....Aii...
A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...
....Dceent...

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Nothing

Man Overal this battle was weak bu ill give it to SMG for his attempts .....

I g2g to work Ill vote some more later
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Old 09-02-06, 10:58 PM   #15
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i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down
>>Not a good opener.

u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash
n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax
>>Poor attempt at creativity.

you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects
so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics
>>You had a concept but bad delivery.

say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets
videotaped it...
n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley
>>No.

claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy
cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy
>>This isn't really a punch.

keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit
n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch
>>Not hitting.


SMG

This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
>>Nothing great... bad wording.

You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
>>Good concept but weak execution.

And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
>>This was cool.

A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...
>>Not bad, but similies get tiring.



Vote: SMG

Way bette concepts and just hit a lot harder in general.
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