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Old 10-22-06, 06:07 PM   #1
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***This Iz My Lost Prayer*** that nu crack.....word

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Old 10-22-06, 06:18 PM   #2
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hmm...the beat isnt my taste,hook is quite long but yeah cool!

u had a decent cool flow...shud have switched just a lil..i'm feeling ur alibs coming accross pretty well,u got the right presence/ emotion ...u got a deent quality mayne..mixing was done well and delivery is iight...i dont see anything to dislike about this...its a smooth joint!...nice!

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Old 10-22-06, 09:40 PM   #3
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beat is aiight.....

you come in nice... delivery coo. effects on hook coo. This is my lost prayer, how you did that part was nice. Your flow pretty coo. beat kinda catchy as it go on. lol kinda remind me of enygma on your verse a bit. Like your delivery. flow coo. gut you like fish. lol flow is nice tho throughout. this coo tho man. overall, nice hook, you held it down. not bad, pretty coo shit

oh also, uhh the chip munk shit was from SC on my track. You gotta play it on lo-fi to hear it on right speed. so if you could peep again on lo-fi i'd appreciate it.

but overall coo shit. 8.8/10

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Old 10-24-06, 03:04 AM   #4
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Old 10-24-06, 06:08 PM   #5
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uh huh beats soundin deadly. You come in nice man, lyrics is meh but you sayin what you gotta say. Flow is smooth and the emotion was good. oh damn lyrics picked up, I like what your talkin bout now after that first switch. I dont think you did do a hook did you? well that'd deadly cuz this songs cool man with the deadly verses. talkin ya talk on this deadly beat. props for the good track dude.

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Old 10-25-06, 08:06 PM   #6
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