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Old 09-01-06, 02:39 PM   #1
L. Veracity
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 09-01-06, 03:32 PM   #2
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smooth beat yo feelin that shit...you've always bin different...on beats
like the sample thogh

1st: Like the drop nice approach...lyrics coo..delivery nice...ur flows always bin dope...like the way u carried ur voice..u was off slightly on ur multies but that aint shit lol

HoOk: Sample is nutz good shit

2nd: Not as good as the first verse wit the flow...but the presence an delivery takes care of that lyrics is fiya on this joint...real emotion...feelin this yo...tellin a love story!

HoOk: Same

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Nice job mixin yo...quality i feel sounded nice...the beat was bananas hook espically was crazy wit the sample set it off yo... so enough of the small talk yo i rate this 9/10 good shit L aint seein u on here for a minute glad to see u droppin
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Old 09-02-06, 11:38 AM   #3
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thanx 4 the reply

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you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 09-06-06, 11:37 AM   #4
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beat is nice def different than most would pick
sample is pretty nice.
lyrically youre voice is nice your emotion was pretty good your voice sounds liek yvvonnes?
i like the lyrical content of the second verse better liked the last line i felt it flow was good no complaints on this whole track
where are you from you kinda have an accent?
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Old 09-12-06, 02:11 AM   #5
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 09-12-06, 11:09 AM   #6
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pretty coo beat. Got some coo lyrics starting out. some deep shit here. hook is dope with the sample. feeling thatgood shit on second verse twoo. lyrics are coo. had some multi's here and there good shit. Overall this was a pretty coo track. Never really heard anything for you, so this was cool first track to peep. not bad. good shit. 8.3/10 stay up

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Old 09-12-06, 04:29 PM   #7
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aiight im rtf

The production tip is good at the beginning. Im likin the Jazzy beat its a nice touch. i can tell its gonna be on some soulful ish. Nice introduction to me. the sampled voice is good. The vocals are good. Your rode the beat nicely. only problem about this is. Your quality. it sounds clogged up. You need to turn down ur adlibs. so u can understand what ur saying. cause im having trouble understanding

Vocals

the lyrics are nice from what i COULD here. this is a real nice tracc in my eyes. one of the better i ehard from you. Your emotion was OOKKK.....meh. kind of boring. Your pressence was kind of boring aswell. Your flow was good. Only problem was. you need to put more emotion into your voice. ...EQ it maybe

overall this was an OK tracc. nothing i can bump more then 2-5 times. But this is a good "few listen" joint.

Nice shit
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