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09-14-06, 05:26 PM
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The Paragraph President
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Illest Intensions ft. Yung Red
IP: 2372 BC06
Yea my bro from school dropped a verse on here with me.
www.soundclick.com/paranoid05 or www.myspace.com/paranoidxl Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3077634 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3077631 fuck you and your valid link shit mods! lol
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09-14-06, 06:14 PM
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scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
kk listning............
ewwwww i hate this beat....not enough goin on for my style............ flows kinda off in some spotz(....................sound robotish) lyrics is ight..... second guy has tha same problem.....he hhad a few nice lines but truthfully i ate this beat so much if u blew this beat off tha map i wouldnt feel it cant stand tha beat..... but good shit keep droppin an get at da kid for any tipz -wunn-
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09-14-06, 09:48 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
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evil kenevil doesnt rhyme with fo'real, lol. Your style needs elevation like a mother fucker, your emotion is wack, robotic sound like a mother fucker. Its not a enjoyable sound, and seen as its music no matter who you are, cunts gotta enjoy your vocals to be able to sit and listen to a track. personally this track would never get a second loop. Basically, your verse para sucks.  real talk.Second kid comes in, quality is anus, he drops off flow at times, again not enjoyable, alot of pops and clicks, basically, i refuse to listen to the rest of this song, its actually annoying me now, so yeh, good bye. |
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09-14-06, 11:01 PM
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L.E
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Listening...
I'll like this beat. Man..what the fuck happened to your quality? You took a major step backwards with that. Para, flow comes in sounding a lot better. Not quite smooth as a baby's ass yet, but it's getting better. Delivery was very bleh though...work on that. Second dude...comes in with a stronger delievery and decent flow, but he quickly falls off. His delivery gets bland, almost sounding like he's bored. Not bad though. Keep it up. |
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09-15-06, 11:50 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
thanks fo the feed, uppin.
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09-16-06, 07:41 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3013 571D
oh ok...I aint know u knew about pharoahe Monch..."shut da fuck up!" sorry had a flash back to original song...damn bad remix choice cuz pharoahe destroyed this beat...okay I am trying real hard to not compare this to original but soon as I hear this beat I hear pharoah giving a rap lesson....ok...para ya quality seemed to have weakened...ya flow was alot smoother than ya flow usually is, delivery was better...but flow jus wasn't right for this beat...u rode snare not the beat...it was a good flow but becuz this is a emptied out beat ya vocal has to cover alot of ground...u more suited for thumping beats that compliment u....lyrically koo...all in all a good drop...ya boy was koo he had similar flow to u, his delivery was koo..very average/filler emcee...he a dude I see being known for solely collabing but he still did his thing..overall good song.
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