Wow i had the links aswell.. thought the convo on AIM would have cleared shit up with that but i guess not

Check like chesse bitch

Pic battle?

If not am prolly going like 30-46

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So is that a yes?

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Blah OMG you fucking suck... no-show hoe..

Lmme key something up real quick then

This kids a retard must be, a little slow as you can see
's why you rep your last weeks record in ya sig 3-3
I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know
........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that*
Bet you felt stupid huh? a mind full of regret?
Kinda like your failed tourny, The best of the sets
Stupid bitch i dont know why im even battling you
Cause if this bitch ate parkerbrothers
.....................................he still wouldnt have a clue
10 down and only 4 more to go n your ass is whored
Cause your text puts everyone to sleep on this board
This kids a bitch, and this battle is a fucking gag
Which is exactly what i did when i saw your girl fag


*second bar. Stanza stands for a group of lines, usually 4 or more
*3rd bar. He bite a bitten verse from Whys That?

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WTF??

Man Yo Shit Is Lame And I Aint Talkin Bout Ya Ass
But It does Drop better Trash For Cash Than That Nigga Flash
You Wanna Play Lil Dude Ill give You The Game
And Put My documentary all of your corpes while yo flesh burn up in flames
damn man you really so suck You need to up your rhymes
and I aint talkin bout My old Verses when I Say
........................................ You got some played out stanza Lines
All About the four Like You talkin bout me when its bout them clovers
but luck will leave you fucked Under Above and You wont get over
Yep I did it sober witout the perk in my system
Dude training day is gone and we got skills...so srrry you missed em
And I knew you wasnt right When You wanna Battle with Pics
Last time i heard You CAME Early in a pic Battles
............................................when you Was beatin Yo Dick
And I didnt Bit You Bitch So Redo Your Homework You Bitch
Before Your Opinion fuck round and cummed like on Like The bitch in ya
But hey You could be a fake denzel and play yo part You slut
bcuz you jus Actin like you can rap Until I Signal your cut

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This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know
........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that


^^pwned




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jibberish

man ur rhymes were baby rhymes man... really try n elevate alot.. i really don't kno how u got 3 wins man no hate, but really


V/flash

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Blah at you trying to show at the last minute and catch me with a no-show verse... You fed and went over the line limit so if you get any votes they will be removed for feeding... N ya did bite.. want links? eh not worth my time just check out not the last but the page before the last page of hall of shame in the complaints forum

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^verses aren't due till Thursday homeboy

Lampejo

I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know
........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that*

^lol, you make four lines like like 6 n shit. Thought these were ight

Stanza..

the pic in ya sig is dope! the verse was blah. There wasn't any wordplay...well "CAME", but that's a lil played. I was waitin for the documentry punch to land but...anyways. Nice try. Read around a bit.

V/ Lamp

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I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know
........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that*

felt these were worth quoting

vs.

Nothing really worth quoting

v/ Flash

not really a decent battle, not really impressed by either drop this battle was meh.. but Flash took this one clearly with better attempts of wordplay and punches

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But hey You could be a fake denzel and play yo part You slut
bcuz you jus Actin like you can rap Until I Signal your cut
STANZ STEER AWAY FROM THE DIC PUNCHES


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I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know
........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that*


V. FLASH TOOK THIS EASY

Wow You Really Take this inetrnet battling seriously LOL .....Look kid I have a Job and School Plus Sports that I do and I Still dropped a day early if am Correct the rules say that verses are due Before Thurs. But I might Be wrong ........And Man I always Show so you can shut that shit up bout noshowing and I wouldnt give two damn cents if you got me dq'ed or not aint like my life depend on this battle ...........................GROW UP BITCH ITS THE INTERNET !!!!!!!!!!!!!..........

And Also I think There is No line Limit You Dumbass...........But I might be wrong ......But Whateva


Nice drop Man ....Stop taking the net so serious you took my verse to heart I was just Battling GROW uP MAN ....

Nice drop though G'luck In the future .....

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Rofl... blah i thought yesterday was thursday.

N yeah there is a linelimit... its whatever hte first person drops

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I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
Stupid bitch i dont know why im even battling you
Cause if this bitch ate parkerbrothers
.....................................he still wouldnt have a clue

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damn man you really so suck You need to up your rhymes
and I aint talkin bout My old Verses when I Say
........................................ You got some played out stanza Lines

Flash put up a no-show verse so I won't comment on it too much, not that good, but a few lines which were okay I guess. Stanza, I feel like u just aren't elevating as I read ur verses every week. I think its great u come in here and show every week, but if you want to improve, follow this advice.

I think u should take a break. Don't battle for a couple weeks. In those couple of weeks, I just want you to read. Read literally hundreds of battles, but only ones from good heads, readin' bad heads work is just a waste of time. Basically from readin, you will not only see what ideas are played, but how they execute the concepts they use. If you see a line you really dig, analyze it a bit and see how they made it. Sometimes when elevating, you just need to stop for a minute and grow and that's what I think u should do.

That is tho, if you care to.. if you don't care much about elevating and are just doin' this to have fun, thats cool too.

Vote - Flash