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The song is called "He Watches Me"

Me and my cousin recorded this song last month. It may be our first song to go on our CD.

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well I dont know who is whoo....at the begining but i like the introo....a lil off key jus a lil...igh implicit...im not christian but i apreciate and respect other religions..and i like this track...the beat is not...ure verse is pretty good...lyrically this is nice...flow wise im feelin it..like it how you switched it up...nice track..im downloadin this....9/10...nice track..ayo whatsup with our collab...

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uppin this song right here.

Just checking out some new stuff.... word - i think Ike used this beat before, maybe someone else I dun remember... Intro could be redone - does seem a little off to me, but anyways - it aint bad. 1st verse, good flow, nice presence, obviously elevating here. On the hook, seems a bit crowded - just something you might want to clean a bit. word.

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thanks Phenom..

Listenin ....Like The Intro ....First verse comin on the flow on point,good emotion good delivery good pressence.........its deep this track Like it a lot hook comin on.......H=Ya Cuz sing's this right?DOPE ....lol
2nd Verse.........Lyrics are dope this prob ma fav verse
Hook again dope hook

I Think Your Emotion Is Strong In This Track A Lot

Track=Dope
Overall:9.5/10

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the singing was irritable...and yea, bunched up



ur flow seems on point


lyrics seem introspective/personal

good track


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word.
sorry for not feeding before
uhh yeh pretty dope track yoh
flow was on point
i liked the concept of this
very deep...and the beat was pretty dope

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^umm okay thanks.

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Intro is bad mixing shit, the things just overlap in bad way...just annoys me...fix the mixing and it'd be nice you know...

Your flow is on point, good delivery as well, it shows that this is an important topic for you. Lyrics are definitely suited for this type of track, people can relate to it, had some deep things in there.

The hook is nice, sometimes vocals are bit low, and they overlap in bad way here and there as well you know...good concept for hook though

Second verse same as first in fact, flow was consistent throughout entire thing. Presence is there without a doubt, I feel like you were building it up which is quite good. Fell off a little near the end but nothing bad though...

Solid song!

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